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I Love You Even Though I Know
I love you even though I know
You show no love for me.
Your eyes are icy springs that feed
My hidden ecstasy.
All night I hold you in my arms
And sleep in your embrace.
All day I turn away from life
To gaze upon your face.
Alone I find within my heart
A black and raging sea,
For only you, beloved one,
Can calm my Galilee. |
| Nicholas Gordon |
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| Darkened ships on a black sea |
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| Name: Frost Bite | 2005-01-28 |
| Nicholas, This is not one of your best poems, but it speaks of our inner pain. I feel as if I can relate, and I shall attempt to join you in expressing this darkest of emotions. Keep loving, and let us jump once more into the breach my friend. |
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| Name: Lee | 2005-04-01 |
Nicholas,
I did not rate this poem very highly and I simply wished to explain why. I can not explain to you what, but it is lacking in a key element. When you find that key to express this void you feel, I believe if you were to add to this poem it has tremendous potential. Keep writing and dont let the criticism bother you.
kaloola@gmail.com |
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| Name: krazy | 2005-06-23 |
| ok you do need to go deeper then this i can almost relate well i can but you need to do better then this it will help if you think more before you write it look deeper inside of you!take care good job though |
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