Love Poems

He finally said i love you

As i looked into his eyes
and found his longing stare
i stopped myself from saying words that showed how much i care
i put my hands up to his face
to hold my feelings in
i wouldn't say the words again
to show my love for him
the last time i had told him
how much he ment to me
he put my hands away from his
and said to leave him be
i never spoke the words again
for fear of his deep fright
i thought it was the last time
untill that blissful night
his fingers traced around my face
pushing hair away
and i was quite unprepared
for he was to say
my heart beat quickly. my head raced on
i thought that i might cry
he looked at me if he might faint
imagine this strong guy
but never would be more impressed
with anything he'd do
than when he took that heartfelt leap
and told me"i love you"
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Name: savannah paris2011-05-29
I Am almost 24 yrs old I wrote this poem dif title 11 years ago don't worry you are definitely not the only one who stole it... Google it, 100's claim this is theirs, that's low don't take other peoples stuff because your not creative enough... I am fucking livid I am a real writer and my poems posted everywhere because it was copied from a poetry contest you do not whatsoever have the right to call it yours look me up on Facebook if u need to talk this is a crapsite
Name: KiWi2005-07-01
yer poem iz amazin n if i could write poems lyk dat i'd b a poet wen im older! lol
Name: laura2005-07-04
dat is well amazin
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