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He finally said i love you Comments
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i have this copyright |
Name: savannah paris | 2011-05-29 |
I Am almost 24 yrs old I wrote this poem dif title 11 years ago don't worry you are definitely not the only one who stole it... Google it, 100's claim this is theirs, that's low don't take other peoples stuff because your not creative enough... I am fucking livid I am a real writer and my poems posted everywhere because it was copied from a poetry contest you do not whatsoever have the right to call it yours look me up on Facebook if u need to talk this is a crapsite |
amazin |
Name: KiWi | 2005-07-01 |
yer poem iz amazin n if i could write poems lyk dat i'd b a poet wen im older! lol |
gr8 |
Name: laura | 2005-07-04 |
dat is well amazin |
awesome |
Name: arleigh and madi | 2005-07-05 |
that was a wicked poem it is so romantic!!! |
Aww... |
Name: Herbrecia | 2005-07-05 |
Wonderful!! |
gr8 |
Name: nina | 2005-07-28 |
i cant express anything else!!!its gr8 |
Poetry |
Name: Dani | 2011-06-10 |
Savannah..i totally agree with you. Ive written alot and people copy my stuff as well. Not far at all. |
kl poem |
Name: emz | 2005-08-04 |
dats such a kl poem!!!
xxx |
omg |
Name: Sasha | 2005-08-08 |
omfg ur so good!! lol i only WISH i cud rite lyk that :P |
brill |
Name: stevie | 2005-08-30 |
that poem woz brill! well done |
Your feelings are so well wrotein down on paper |
Name: Me Me | 2005-08-31 |
If I was to say something to you i would just say what an amazing writer you are it sounds like you really know what you want ..and thta was him ! .. it sounds like hed be so lucky to have a girl like you ! .. you really have a way with words and I think that you should continuie writting and telling the world how you feel with you r beautiful words
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awwww |
Name: tiffer | 2005-09-10 |
oh mi gosh! that was the cutest poem ever! its so true! why is it so friggan hard for guys to say "i love you"???? |
great |
Name: Alezae | 2005-09-13 |
That poem was GREAT! It reminded me of me and my baby boy. Keep doin what you doin cuz you got skillz! |
i LOVE this poem |
Name: kiki | 2005-09-21 |
hey, this was in chicken soup for the teenage soul, omg im such a nerd. but the poem is AWESOME |
amazing |
Name: liana | 2005-09-22 |
i loved it i started crying!! :'(
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GrEaT pOeM |
Name: chloe | 2005-09-23 |
Its sooo gud and romantic i luv it if i cud write um like tht i wud be a poet wen im older too amazing ! ! |
SUPER |
Name: Lauren | 2005-09-26 |
reli gud poem aye! |
GREAT |
Name: Brittany | 2005-10-02 |
This poem was soo great..it is so realistic and trust me i know from experience |
i wish |
Name: kjl | 2005-10-06 |
omg i wish cameron loved me :( why oh why |
Alright |
Name: Mavi | 2005-10-11 |
i know this because i Have written better poems |
Wow |
Name: sharmeene | 2005-10-12 |
this poem is so beautiful. It is the best poem i ever read! |
awwww |
Name: Sian | 2005-10-14 |
this is such a fabtastic poem!!!!!! hu ever wrote this is truley awesome at writting poetry! its so romantic and realistic!!!! oooo! well done! =D |
Well done |
Name: Holly | 2005-10-15 |
Thats hell good. Well done. Go for it!! |
nice |
Name: diane | 2005-10-15 |
that was soooooooooooooo cute!!!!!!!!!!love it!!! |
omg |
Name: marija | 2005-10-19 |
dis is amazing soo good |
CUTE |
Name: Hottyfourtytwo | 2005-10-22 |
that was soooo cute! =) |
sweet |
Name: vanessa | 2005-11-12 |
ur poem was really good....can u write one maybe about a guy named steve? and how u love him so much..but your parents wont let you go out with him? thatd be awsome |
made my heart race |
Name: felicia | 2005-11-16 |
THIS POEM MADE MY HEART RACE IT WAS SO SWEET THAT IS HOW MY BOYFRIEND KINDA ACTED THE FIRST TIME I SAID ILOVE YOU THEN HE LOVED ME BACK ....................aWESOME POEM BEAUTIFUL |
wow |
Name: kirsty-lou | 2005-11-24 |
wot a great poem, its suits my situation brilliantly! whoeva rote that is very cleva! |
awww so cute |
Name: lil angle | 2005-11-24 |
awwwwwww so cute mi bf tells mi he luvs mi all the tym
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i love it |
Name: samantha | 2005-12-15 |
i like the poem it is really good.im glad that you care for a guy like that when my boyfriend told me that he loved me i knew my life was not going to be the same cause i had a life to now share with me and my boyfriend has been going out for five years and we never had a fight so i know how you feel but just wait you will feel like you are never going to break up and your feels will go deeper in love but trust me it feels good to have someone that really cares for you it really does.but im so happy that you feel the same way.and your poem is very very good i loved it, it was very romantic and sweet i was very well amazed. keep up the good work.you are doing really good with your writing. |
awesomee |
Name: Hale | 2006-01-17 |
that was so sweet and i love how u made it all rhyme! love it! |
wonderful |
Name: nessy | 2006-02-02 |
All I can say is wonderful what you wrote.. |
LOVING |
Name: BAMBNM | 2006-02-12 |
HE'S FINALLY BECOMIN LOVING
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02-14-06 |
Name: jim | 2006-02-14 |
That was so sweet.That was very sweet for some ypoung little couple or two little kids just starting to date. |
dude |
Name: jesus | 2006-02-14 |
02-14-06
that was very sweet. ireally really like it.people may not like it but i do.
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sweet |
Name: Anamaris | 2006-02-15 |
I actually have this poem in my chicken soup for the teenage soul i've read so many times and still dont get bored of it. Whoever wrote this where ever you are keep it gurl!!Thats sweet! |
hey gurl |
Name: sexy mama | 2006-02-25 |
love your poem ist really good@!!!!!!!!!!! |
wonderful |
Name: buffy | 2006-03-13 |
Great poem i loved it!!!!!!!!yaya |
true |
Name: lulu | 2006-03-18 |
dat is sooooo tru! i told my guy i loved him,he totally freakd! and broke up with me. 6 months later we're back 2gthr nd its him saying i love you. this poem is sooooo! tru! if only i could do poetry like u! thmbs up! xx |
guys |
Name: anna | 2006-03-18 |
a guy has neva sed i love u 2 me, (hint hint Will!) |
wow |
Name: Alexa | 2006-03-28 |
that was so cute i picked this one cuz it happened 2 me 2! |
GReat |
Name: TAvia | 2006-04-14 |
the poem was as if i lived it, good job! |
nice |
Name: someone | 2006-04-27 |
ur poem was so nice and sweet
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it kool |
Name: abbster | 2006-05-06 |
its alright keep doing what you are doing the best writing poems |
Nice |
Name: Kass. | 2006-05-07 |
This is so cute. Same thing happened to moi. I was so happy when he told me the same thing. :D |
SO SWEET |
Name: ANA | 2006-05-18 |
I LOVE THIS POEM IS SO SWEET AND ROMANTIC |
Awww |
Name: Chiqis | 2006-06-27 |
omg that is soo cute...i liked alot
nice words from the heart...loved it!! |
touching |
Name: Liv | 2006-06-28 |
comment title says it all, good job =) |
wow |
Name: tiffany | 2006-07-13 |
dat poem touched mi deep soo romantic |
i love it |
Name: leeanna | 2006-07-15 |
its greatt your a good writer |
Kewl |
Name: Veronica | 2006-08-19 |
That was awsome, if only it would happen to me.
You should become a writer. |
ADORABLE |
Name: ASIA | 2006-10-11 |
I LOVED IT! |
how similar |
Name: ashley | 2006-10-21 |
this poem is exactly what happened
they have a real gift! |
sweet |
Name: madison | 2006-11-03 |
tis poem is so sweet it reminds me of my old boii friend |
awesome |
Name: rachael | 2006-11-13 |
dat poem is awesome very romantic!!!!!! |
cool |
Name: Maria n Salvador | 2006-11-22 |
i love diz poem it straight from the heart and romantic |
wiked |
Name: vicsta | 2006-11-22 |
This poem rox!! you are great at writing poems! |
My comment for the author of this lovely poem |
Name: Seconchance | 2006-11-29 |
I loved u'r peom it reminded me of my first time my husband-to-be told me that he loved me. Thank u for being brave to write such a sweet poem, i was to scared and i'm 23years old. |
um... |
Name: Caitie | 2006-12-06 |
awwwwwwwwwww...
its the best feeling when you hear those three words..
especially when they are said with the deepest meaning...
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so sweet |
Name: Diana | 2006-12-10 |
when i was reading it i was so close to cry
its soo nice..
i luw it..
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WOW |
Name: unknown | 2006-12-19 |
I loVED the poem and that happened to me and i thoutht that he was playing around but he wasnt and i was so shock that coulden't say enthing i was speech less then like 3 days later he came 2 my window and he came in he put he's hands on my face and i had butterflys in my stomch and in my mind i was saying "DONt CRY" and he said "I LOVEYOU" |
so true |
Name: doesnt mater | 2006-12-27 |
that was absolutely amazin coz wen u read it u understand the emotions and feelings that have been brought into the poem which is usually really hard to do..also as a teenage girl and from their point of view..they words are soo true..you should definitely look into as a career |
aww |
Name: Ruth | 2007-01-07 |
that is a really sweet poem!i even put it on bebo |
Briilant |
Name: Woodiie | 2007-01-12 |
Tht Peom Is Really Goood!!!!///xo |
totheheart |
Name: katiee | 2007-01-21 |
this is the sweetest poem everr. i remember how my first love was. this is greeat. =} |
I rated this 10 |
Name: Tiffany | 2007-01-28 |
I really did like this one because it is exactly wat i went through. I also rated this a number 10 because i like poems that ryme and this one did. |
wicked |
Name: katie | 2007-03-02 |
i said that to my boy friend he saaaid i love u to katie he gave me a kiss on the lip and now i got a boy friend he loves me so much now beacause off that poem thankyouxxx
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awww |
Name: rissa | 2007-03-08 |
aww i saw that poem in chicken noodle soup and i fell right in love with it! that was awsome |
Real good |
Name: Mrs.Rose | 2007-03-19 |
this poem is very touching and it digs deep inside the soul |
i can relate in so many ways |
Name: Stephanie | 2007-03-30 |
great poem, i'm a poet myself, i think i have 1 just like this. well just showing u luv on it, so i hope u write more poems similar to this 1. |
hektik |
Name: Dina | 2007-04-29 |
VERY WELL DONE! ur really a poet ...beautiful! |
I LOVE THIS POEM |
Name: Jordie | 2007-05-08 |
this poem is awsome i read it a million times |
i love this one |
Name: ummmm someone | 2007-06-04 |
i love this poem soo much its like the same thing dat happened to me |
bueatiful |
Name: yuridia | 2007-11-03 |
this was the most romantic poem ever
you should consider to write more 4 real |
wonderful |
Name: frena | 2007-12-03 |
this poem is nice and romantic |
Wowerz |
Name: vivi | 2010-04-19 |
Thats exactly what he did....... just exactly. :) I couldn't but smile... since I won't be the only one feeling that. I love it. lol |
cool |
Name: nthabiseng lekaota | 2010-06-09 |
i luv this poems it realy cool |
GREAT |
Name: J-Hillarie | 2010-07-01 |
THIS POEM IS REALLY GOOD. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. |
wicked |
Name: LucyLou | 2010-07-29 |
2 wordz,, LOVE IT,,:) |
cute |
Name: kelsey | 2010-09-23 |
this reminds me so much of my boyfriend i love it! |
wow |
Name: emily | 2010-10-15 |
wow thats amazing and it touched my heart i wish i could write like that it would be so much easier to show my emotions |
MWAH |
Name: lynnea | 2010-10-22 |
this poem is awsome and rlly cute..i wanna tell my boyfriend that i love him cuz ive been with him for two months!!!!JONATHAN
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awwwwsome |
Name: Strawberry | 2011-01-17 |
awww i really like that i wished a boyfriend will say that to me in front of my face |
Wow |
Name: Miranda | 2011-02-07 |
This is exactly how my very first bf went I just wish I still dated him I still feel for him a lot |
very touchy |
Name: palak | 2009-05-25 |
its awesome . its gvng real feel 2 a reader
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WTF. |
Name: Ignatious Loyola | 2009-06-14 |
My God - this is why I am absolutely terrified to become an English teacher.
You rhymed, congratulations! You also misspelled meant, and left out a few important words. Spellchequer, anyone? |
WOW |
Name: Kaitlyn | 2009-10-01 |
that was so good i love it...
it was to sweet
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scary true |
Name: carolina | 2009-12-08 |
This poem touches me so much. I am in this situation now, waiting for those 3 words which I see in his eyes, yet he's afraid to say.... |
just great |
Name: Champ | 2008-06-11 |
wow this thing was just amazing it really amazed me!!!
its really nice..!! |
haha |
Name: im the best... | 2008-07-15 |
this is totaly the same poem in one of the chicken soup books......
can nu write no poems of ur own.... |
Love it |
Name: Jeneva | 2008-11-07 |
This poem is amazing!
I love it so much.
I can totally relate, because this is how I feel.
This poems me cry, and I know why.
It is truly wonderful!
Nice Job |
best |
Name: mairah | 2008-11-25 |
omg this poem is good i think yuo should be a poet ..
well this is a good poem |
nice |
Name: marry | 2008-12-14 |
i love this poem it is nice me and my ex did the same thing |
love in a book |
Name: vanessa jasiakiewicz | 2008-12-22 |
this poem is the best poem in the history of poems
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its so cute |
Name: Mexigrl | 2008-12-23 |
this poem is so cute i even wish that it would happen to me |
Amazing |
Name: Ashley | 2009-02-07 |
So cute !
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Very Good |
Name: brittany merann | 2009-02-20 |
i can realate to this poem! i love it! |
reallyu nice |
Name: audrey | 2009-03-14 |
its really nyc u know lyk did it reallie happen or did u write it out of imagination..its just really cute |
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Name: janaeya | 2009-04-28 |
this poem was writtting in a book from 13 years ago,... im pretty sure u copied it and can be charged |
wow... |
Name: Nina | 2009-05-11 |
whoa that poem is wonderful! it's so beautiful! very well-worded and drawn-out! wow... i love it |
ewwwww |
Name: DeeAndra Haynes | 2008-04-08 |
gurl u got dat out of dat chicken soup 4 da teenage soul
U NEED 2 STOP LIL THANG!!!!! |
awhh. |
Name: tanya | 2008-04-08 |
wow. that poem was gawjus. i love it.! |
that is so hott |
Name: sniffles | 2008-05-03 |
wow that is like how me and my man were like it is like u wrote this almost about like my life
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god |
Name: edimira | 2008-05-13 |
that's the best!!!!!
god bless you |
SO TRUE... |
Name: CHRISTINE | 2008-05-14 |
MA BABY DID THE SAME THANG..... |
I LUV IT |
Name: Brenda Perez | 2008-05-15 |
this poem is the best poem that i ever read |
wow |
Name: Zay | 2012-01-20 |
Savannah Paris that was a amazing poem but i dont think the girl is trying to say its hers she said the author is unknow well now we know. |
nice |
Name: sophia | 2012-02-10 |
i love this poem but it made my mom cry because she sayed that the same thing happend to her
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LUV UR POEM |
Name: Debbie | 2012-02-18 |
i luv ur poem its so sweet |
Luvv it |
Name: Daisy | 2012-03-20 |
Really touching:) |
MY POEM |
Name: Breana Braig | 2011-10-11 |
Im sorry but i have a certificate and everything when i got this poem published!!! So go Fuck yourself the is my fucking poem you dumbass bitch
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Good vs Evil |
Name: DaQuesisha | 2011-11-02 |
This poem is amazing, I love it...I love how it is so realistic. I write poems also but not like this one. If i could write poems like you I would never stop writing them.lol
Also, I agree with Savannah, dont you know that taking other peoples work and getting credit for it is called PLAGARISM!!! That is beyond rude and disrespectful. |
what i think |
Name: Un Known | 2011-11-29 |
great poem i love it. people on here that doesnt like it id rather you not put an ugly comment because you were probably the first on ewho tried to take credit for this by stealing it! kk(: thnx XOXO |
Stop Plagiarizing from Plagiarism |
Name: Jennifer Orendach | 2012-08-04 |
Wow, Savannah. You're clearly mistaken and you know it. This is MY poem which was published in Chicken Soup for the Teenage Soul, vol. 3 approximately 12 years ago. ...And I have the copyright on it which is good up until 75 years after my death, at which time you can pretend its yours online all you'd like. Geez. |
One more thing... |
Name: Jennifer Sparano | 2012-08-04 |
The same goes for you, Ms. Braig. It would be lovely if you didn't take credit for what's not yours but I've already suggested something similar under your Facebook post. I'm a human being that Googles her own name for fun once in awhile. I guess people do this because they assume the true owner doesn't really exist. Well, I do. I'm flattered everyone loves the work I did when I was 16. Many thanks, just please don't take it as yours. Thanks. |
One more thing... |
Name: Jennifer Orendach | 2012-08-04 |
The same goes for you, Ms. Braig. It would be lovely if you didn't take credit for what's not yours but I've already suggested something similar under your Facebook post. I'm a human being that Googles her own name for fun once in awhile. I guess people do this because they assume the true owner doesn't really exist. Well, I do. I'm flattered everyone loves the work I did when I was 16. Many thanks, just please don't take it as yours. Thanks. |
...And just for good measure... |
Name: Jennifer Orendach | 2012-08-04 |
All anyone has to do is Google the poem OR my name (the reason I've posted with 2 separate last names is because I'm married now. But Google the name above). You'll find that this came from Chicken Soup. If you buy the book, you'll be able to read the author biography section in which I had written that I was 16 yrs old....that was 12 yrs ago. So if Savannah was almost 24 last yr and wrote it when she claims, she would've had to have been 13. Sorry, no dice. And all it takes is a Facebook search to see Breanna Braig is still in high school now. Her only network is her school. Sorry again. |
poem |
Name: storm wallace | 2013-02-25 |
I just love this poem it really touched my heart |
my favorite poem |
Name: kayla | 2014-01-12 |
I remember the first time i read this and I still love as much today as I did in 2002 |
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