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Let Me Steal You from the One You Love
Let me steal you from the one you love
In hopes that as time passes you'll love me.
So deeply does your smile my heart move
That merely touching you is ecstasy.
Normally, such crimes are not my style,
Nor would I infidelity propose;
But I love you so much I can't revile
Anything that some slight hope bestows.
Let me show you how I'll care for you,
How good it feels to have me at your side,
How spring eternal I'll make ever new,
And every want or passing whim provide.
Try me out. I promise you'll be mine
Once you see how bright my sun can shine. |
| Nicholas Gordon |
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| Very Nice |
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| Name: Nikki | 2005-05-04 |
Your poems are very good and they show how you feel and that is how a poem should be... feelings. Please never let anyone tell you any different about your work. Keep It Up.
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| wow ur r brilliant |
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| Name: natalie | 2006-12-07 |
| Hey ur a gr8 poet keep it up!:) u mean alot in the poems i can tell, it must take u ages:) welldone:D |
| perfect |
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| Name: yo home | 2009-01-20 |
if this works for me buddy you a genius
thanks man
keep writing dude if you dont have a gf
lil advice be tough in public romantic with her
and whatever moods she is on the phone or texting be the same as her
thanks again man
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