I Love You as a Valley Loves Comments

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okokok
Name: krazy	2005-06-23
it was ok but try harder that was probably one of the worst poems ive read from you so far ! i mean it has no meaning you are just comparing things to a person that isnt very good i mean i may be 14 but that was bad im sure they all would agree with me unless they dont know a true meaning of a poem!

fabulous
Name: valgoodkarma moonbeam	2011-06-27
I am moved.. just touching and so clearly felt...

True Love
Name: Angel	2006-03-02
Anyone who has experienced true love understands the correlations expressed in this poem. The absolute need for one the exist so that the other may also is what separates true love from anything else. My only disappointment was the very last line. I realise this is about unrequited love but the directness doesn't flow with the symbolism of the rest of the piece.

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Name: Rachel	2006-10-12
"krazy" i think your comment is very wrong... That poem has meaning obviously to the person who wrote it. It does not matter that you, yourself do not like it. I do not agree, and I don't think it's bad at all. You obviously don't know the true meaning of a poem. Because a poem is about expressing what you feel, not putting a couple of rhyming words together.

its a good poem
Name: someone else	2010-05-08
to krazy- i agree with rachel. this poem obviouly means a lot to the author and he is trying to express how he feels about the person. if he shows it by comparing it to something else, then so be it. im also 14, but i actually know what a poem is about.

Thumbs up
Name: Anon	2010-07-23
What a beautiful poem. I love the analogies use to really reflect the strength and longevity of the feelings.

Fav Line
Name: Uzzy	2011-01-29
"I need you as the moon requires The sun to make it shine" is an astounding line! This is a wonderful poem, "krazy" is as crazy does! The person must be deranged to say this is one of the "worst poems" she's read! The final line sticks with you, but I think "oh!" would have sounded more heartfelt than "ah!".

I like it
Name: Nadine	2009-02-24
Its actually quite beautiful. The use of allegory conveyed to me the depth of the love for this other person.

I loved every word
Name: Chloe	2009-03-03
I really did love every word in that poem, it explains so much how I feel. I wish I could write poetry as well as you do...

huh
Name: huh	2009-05-14
Omg that was so sweet, man, that was so good, like really... KRAZY's comment was total sh** and very rude. IF you don't like it then suck it because that was a beautiful poem. I wanted to cry, but I'm at school and can't do that.

beautiful
Name: liam payne	2012-06-16
aww. that was so sweet. it moved me

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That takes us up to
Name: Tessica	2014-05-23
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