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I Love You as a Valley Loves Comments
| Reader Comments |
| okokok |
| Name: krazy | 2005-06-23 |
| it was ok but try harder that was probably one of the worst poems ive read from you so far ! i mean it has no meaning you are just comparing things to a person that isnt very good i mean i may be 14 but that was bad im sure they all would agree with me unless they dont know a true meaning of a poem! |
| True Love |
| Name: Angel | 2006-03-02 |
| Anyone who has experienced true love understands the correlations expressed in this poem. The absolute need for one the exist so that the other may also is what separates true love from anything else. My only disappointment was the very last line. I realise this is about unrequited love but the directness doesn't flow with the symbolism of the rest of the piece. |
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| Name: Rachel | 2006-10-12 |
| "krazy" i think your comment is very wrong... That poem has meaning obviously to the person who wrote it. It does not matter that you, yourself do not like it. I do not agree, and I don't think it's bad at all. You obviously don't know the true meaning of a poem. Because a poem is about expressing what you feel, not putting a couple of rhyming words together. |
| its a good poem |
| Name: someone else | 2010-05-08 |
| to krazy- i agree with rachel. this poem obviouly means a lot to the author and he is trying to express how he feels about the person. if he shows it by comparing it to something else, then so be it. im also 14, but i actually know what a poem is about. |
| Thumbs up |
| Name: Anon | 2010-07-23 |
| What a beautiful poem. I love the analogies use to really reflect the strength and longevity of the feelings. |
| I like it |
| Name: Nadine | 2009-02-24 |
Its actually quite beautiful.
The use of allegory conveyed to me the depth of the love for this other person. |
| I loved every word |
| Name: Chloe | 2009-03-03 |
I really did love every word in that poem, it explains so much how I feel.
I wish I could write poetry as well as you do... |
| Hey Charlley |
| Name: Stuart | 2009-04-30 |
| hey how are you today chloe is going to work experiance thingy |
| hahahaha |
| Name: Sexxi Queen | 2009-04-30 |
| Where is she going?? |
| on the excursion with us |
| Name: Stuart | 2009-04-30 |
| silly sexy Queen |
| Silly Boi |
| Name: Sexxi Queen | 2009-04-30 |
| You stupid, stupid boy. |
| degefhgfdsgshb |
| Name: Stuart | 2009-04-30 |
| were in trouble trouble oh ohhhhh |
| Stupid |
| Name: Stuart | 2009-04-30 |
| your in trouable stuart |
| Gives me |
| Name: Sexxi Queen | 2009-04-30 |
| Im going to whip you silly bad boy :) |
| You cant spell |
| Name: Stuart | 2009-04-30 |
| hahahahahahahhahahaha |
| IM NOT JOKING |
| Name: IM NOT JOKING | 2009-04-30 |
| I'M NOT JOKING |
| i love ladies |
| Name: Sexxi Queen | 2009-04-30 |
| yes i really do in fact |
| i know your not joking |
| Name: Stuart | 2009-04-30 |
| i know your not jokingi know your not jokingi know your not jokingi know your not joking |
| I THOUGHT YOU WERE GAY |
| Name: I THOUGHT YOU WERE GAY | 2009-04-30 |
your gay, your gay arent you??? gay gay gay gay gay gay.
YOUR HAPPY AND GAY??? |
| im leaving |
| Name: stuart | 2009-04-30 |
| bye bye bitch face |
| huh |
| Name: huh | 2009-05-14 |
| Omg that was so sweet, man, that was so good, like really... KRAZY's comment was total sh** and very rude. IF you don't like it then suck it because that was a beautiful poem. I wanted to cry, but I'm at school and can't do that. |
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