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Although You Are with Someone Else Comments
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| Aahhh |
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| Name: Yunuspm | 2011-04-26 |
| Felt as if my feelings found words finally |
| OmG |
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| Name: Moesha | 2011-04-28 |
| This is absolutely how i feel!! i love this! wonderful work! |
| Love is blind |
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| Name: Sandra | 2011-05-09 |
| i knew how you felt,a really touching poem~ |
| How i feel |
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| Name: Tammy | 2011-05-18 |
| I feel the same way about my best guy friend |
| wow |
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| Name: oscar | 2005-06-08 |
| i'm really shocked, this is a gr8 poem |
| whoah |
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| Name: myra | 2005-08-10 |
| this is exactly how i feel...love it... |
| soo gud |
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| Name: hannah | 2011-06-26 |
| i love this ist so emotonal it helped me with my h/w thanxs so much and i have made my own poem related to what this poem is about. thnx so much |
| hmm.. |
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| Name: yenny | 2005-10-07 |
| this how I feel either..U almost make me cryin by reading these...how happy I am if I could send this for him |
| wow |
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| Name: Chicana | 2005-10-28 |
| i am really diggin this one b/c its exactly how i feel about this guy im in love with... |
| i am speechless |
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| Name: Nicola | 2005-10-30 |
| i can almost relate to this poem. i am in the same position! i love it alot... |
| My thoughts exactly |
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| Name: Dee | 2005-11-06 |
WOW..if i didnt know any better id swear you were inside my head when you wrote that.
Love it |
| rawr |
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| Name: grrrrl unhappy | 2011-04-05 |
| uhh now i know people understand me |
| Feelings |
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| Name: Katie | 2006-04-01 |
| I feel this way about a guy at my school. |
| Sigh... |
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| Name: Debal | 2006-07-24 |
| That's not only for love requited, also for love forlorn, forgotten, betrayed, even er, ... dumped! I wonder how any woman who knew him could afford to ignore him, ever. |
| been there... |
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| Name: Billy | 2006-09-11 |
| I Don't like it, but that's where i find myself, time after time.... you just can't give up on it though... |
| wow beautiful |
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| Name: tanina | 2006-10-12 |
i love it that totally describes me
i mean my boyfriend i wish was still with me but i only dream |
| kiss |
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| Name: scarlet | 2007-02-08 |
| painfully true |
| Nice |
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| Name: Jodi | 2007-03-14 |
| nice poem...i love it |
| X SACTLY |
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| Name: AQUANETTA | 2007-05-10 |
O FEEL LIKE THIS ABOUT A BOY WHO IS GOING OUT WITH ONE OF MY CLOSE FRIEND ITS WONDERFUL
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| baha |
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| Name: esther | 2007-07-15 |
| Geez dude get a life. If someone doesn't love you back in return, it just means you weren't meant for each other. move on! |
| OMG |
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| Name: Carly | 2007-09-13 |
| i luv this poem...it is just great at describing how i feel!!! |
| interesting |
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| Name: Narvs | 2007-10-01 |
| this poem explains exactly how I feel right now. |
| okk |
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| Name: jessi | 2007-10-07 |
it's good
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| wow.. |
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| Name: megha | 2007-12-09 |
| u r true this is the same way i feel.. |
| Perfect... |
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| Name: Anonymous | 2007-12-24 |
| This is perfect, thank you. |
| love |
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| Name: tina | 2011-02-23 |
| I never told you how i felt and i regret it to this day.Well i think that i might love you. i dream about you night and day. i dont regret the time we spend talking and laughing but i do regret not telling you i love you cesar yaya. |
| crap i feel dumb |
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| Name: isabelle | 2011-02-24 |
| everyone's talking about hwo they cried and how this is just like how they feel bu i thought it was dumb i'm such a stupid cynasist... i wish i could feel |
| wow |
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| Name: Niaz Betab | 2011-03-08 |
| I really love this poem, real love poetry. |
| empathy |
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| Name: Suzel | 2011-02-22 |
| My love, my dear love, this is how I feel for him. |
| Woah.... |
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| Name: Alysha | 2010-05-08 |
| Wow... This is how I feel about someone I know too. Even tho they're with someone they really love, i still love them back. Wonderful job. :') |
| Beautiful |
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| Name: Emma | 2010-05-09 |
| This was a gorgeos poem. |
| awww |
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| Name: Samantha Betton | 2010-05-15 |
| this is the most touching poem ever i just want to say i love it 100% |
| Yes |
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| Name: Love lorn | 2010-09-21 |
| Exactly how I feel at the moment. How did you know. |
| ... |
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| Name: sarah | 2010-10-08 |
| I am in shock at how this IS my life. |
| gasp |
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| Name: CSV | 2010-10-29 |
| This poem says exactly what I am going through right now. I cant believe these feelings are common enough that i can be expressed so easily in a short poem |
| perfect |
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| Name: Alexis | 2010-11-09 |
| This really hits home with exactly how I feel.. |
| hmmm |
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| Name: shamma | 2010-11-09 |
| mi miss you alot dony |
| Nice |
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| Name: Awesome | 2010-12-09 |
| Beautiful poem(: |
| simple yet... |
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| Name: maskbluray | 2011-01-19 |
| simple yet very captivating. silent lover ;( |
| amen brother |
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| Name: vee | 2011-02-07 |
| this is nice :) |
| o wow |
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| Name: mae mae | 2011-02-07 |
this is how i feel about a boy in my public speakin class...lol
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| Superb |
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| Name: Farah | 2009-05-29 |
| dude...your poems are great! love all of them...keep writing! |
| this is |
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| Name: jeremy | 2009-06-19 |
| The root of all emotion that lingers between me and someone I know I can never have |
| Soo good |
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| Name: Bec | 2009-08-13 |
| Wow you are such a good poet! Want to help me with my poetry assignment? haha |
| nice |
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| Name: love | 2009-09-02 |
| its a good poeam you do really think |
| so sad |
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| Name: Fred | 2009-11-18 |
| so sad but good poem |
| Beautiful |
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| Name: gorgik | 2010-02-11 |
| This poem is SO about me. |
| seriously |
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| Name: kitty | 2010-03-02 |
| Just let the realationship be. Move on. |
| Uninspiring |
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| Name: David Kong | 2010-03-28 |
| One who suffers from unrequited love might appear to be calm as this poem. However if the love was real, it should be one of the most devastating experiences in one's life. How can this poem even remotely represent the feelings of one who is suffering from unrequited love? That simile? Feels like a sore thumb that was stuck in to invent artistic merit in an otherwise elementary (and colloquial) poem. |
| Fantastic |
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| Name: Zac | 2008-06-11 |
I love it. It's longing. It's neutral. It's pure. Fantastic. |
| speechless |
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| Name: kasheef | 2008-08-04 |
| i want to say these lines to the girl i love......but i cant...... |
| uuhhhmazing |
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| Name: celeste | 2008-08-10 |
this is understanding.
i feel this way every day and its too much pain
to tell him in person.
thanks, |
| true poem |
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| Name: JoJo | 2008-09-05 |
| i was looking for something to send to a friend to cheer her up a little while at the same time i sometimes also feel the pain of 'unrequitted love'. it is acutally interesting that many people feel the same but rarely express what they really feel. we never know when this pain stops and starts. love has strange habits: it can hurt while we're in love or hurt us when ones love is not being returned. a true poem that sincerely expresses what many of us feel some times! |
| hic hic.. |
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| Name: Tracy | 2008-09-07 |
| very nice poem, it makes me cry... im in the same situation... |
| beautiful |
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| Name: Paul | 2008-09-08 |
| This perfectly describes every emotion, thought, and idea I want to convey. I had to catch my breath when I read this. |
| TOUCHING |
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| Name: RAJEN | 2008-10-30 |
| WISH MY " J 4 LIFE " CUD READ THIS ... MISS HER SO MUCH ! |
| Awesome |
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| Name: KaKen | 2008-11-15 |
| This is so true, i feel exactly like this |
| fits me perfect |
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| Name: onjo | 2008-11-20 |
| took the words right out of my mouth. How terrible it is to be in love with someone already taken. |
| 9 thx |
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| Name: somekidintheback | 2008-12-09 |
| damn, speechless..... |
| oh my buddha |
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| Name: Tivoine | 2009-02-23 |
| how sad it is! |
| altough you are with someone else |
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| Name: lohit. t | 2009-03-04 |
| very tragically funny |
| Sums it Up |
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| Name: Sad | 2009-03-12 |
| Sums up my life; waiting. |
| Wow.. |
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| Name: Eefia | 2008-05-31 |
| The poem's beautiful.. |
| wow |
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| Name: kenny | 2008-02-06 |
| i like this....gret poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| Real |
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| Name: Johhny K. | 2008-02-18 |
| Just telling her how you feel is a great feat... and one that will make you just a little more content. |
| wowowow |
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| Name: lala | 2008-02-27 |
| this is exactly how i feel,, ill wait until he comes back to me..no matter how long..that is what true love is.. |
| ok..... |
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| Name: Tiffany | 2008-03-31 |
this is pretty good
not bad..
=]] |
| woah |
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| Name: nani | 2008-04-20 |
| this is really good. |
| MY GOD |
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| Name: Chelsea Wilks | 2008-05-05 |
| I love this poem but you seem to be the only poet that I like.It's kind of driving me insane.I can't exactly figure out why but geez man, you're GREAT.:D |
| Dead on |
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| Name: Lea Lecter | 2011-07-31 |
| Could not have explained my situation any better. Nice stuff man. |
| To Know |
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| Name: Valeria | 2011-09-16 |
| Its good to know that you can love someone your willing to let go... |
| To Know |
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| Name: Valeria | 2011-09-16 |
| Its good to know that you can love someone your willing to let go... |
| ugh |
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| Name: lonely girl | 2011-11-04 |
| this is xactky how i feel.. |
| not lost yet |
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| Name: james | 2012-04-25 |
| cool guy, playing the long game, hope it worked for him. |
| Feel the same for my first love |
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| Name: Ameen | 2011-12-21 |
| Something happens to me when I read this. It feels like some sharp thing is pierced into my heart. Incredible lines. One can relate to this only if you feel for someone. |
| Thanks |
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| Name: Serena | 2012-05-21 |
| thank you for writing this poem |
| jrihHtLykHKTX |
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| Name: Matheresa | 2012-12-08 |
| Can I simply say what a aid to screah out somebody who actually is aware of what theyre talking about on the internet. You positively know learn how to bring a difficulty to light and make it important. Extra individuals need to read this and perceive this side of the story. I cant consider youre not more fashionable since you positively have the gift. |
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| Name: Meghal | 2012-12-08 |
| Thanks for liking this, y'all. I hope I made it clear that I imtlpcaie myself in this satire too to some extent. I am not as social as I could and perhaps should be. I can think of some literary bloggers we would all do well to emulate, but I don't want to embarass them by calling them out, and in any case there is no one best way to blog but I will say that when I click on a blog and see no sidebar links or links page whatsoever, I tend to click away again without reading unless I know the author. The commenting part is trickier, because really there's nothing wrong with blogs that have no comments in certain circumstances it may be preferable, like for instance when your blog gets too popular and the comment threads require constant maintenance. (I sympathise with Ron Silliman in that regard. One certainly can't accuse him of silo-blogging, either his links section got so huge, he had to give it its own site, and he's always been generous with links in posts, too. So in my mind, a good guy, even if I disagree with him 75% of the time.) I am acutely aware of the fact that I don't comment on the blogs I read nearly as much as I should. Usually I relegate blog-reading to the end of the day when I'm too tired to do much else. But I tell myself that I'm already giving enough back by editing qarrtsiluni and curating Moving Poems, and perhaps that's true. Anyway, one of the other things I suck at is Twitter. I don't thank people for RTs or Follow Friday mentions, rarely follow back people who follow me, and generally use it as a broadcast medium. I am happy to know that lots of others, including some poets and witers, are using it in a more social manner. Christine, I'm pretty tone-deaf about status games, so I wasn't aware that was even an issue on FB, but poets being poets, how could it not be, really. |
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| Name: Eliona | 2012-12-09 |
| Hi Clive We've followed a dssucision format for almost all the art or photo posts in the Words of Power issue, so just look for an image post and click on the audio player or podcast link. (We'll have a new photo post going up to today, in less than an hour.) I'd be interested in your reactions. I'm not sure whether or how we'll continue doing this for other issues that we're not the editors for; that has yet to be worked out. We're also not terribly sophisticated in our analyses or at least, I'm not and would be very open to having knowledgeable guest commenters from time to time to talk about some of the art and photos, but we haven't actively pursued that idea quite yet since we're still sort of feeling our way and collecting feedback from listeners and from the artists (which has generally been positive). |
| Great poem |
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| Name: Jake | 2013-07-21 |
| I've read many poems that claim to be good poems about unrequited love. This, by far, is the best I've read. Lovely poem. |
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| Name: Mvuselelo | 2013-07-25 |
| I like this poem as well... |
| Brandy looks awkward |
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| Name: Susana | 2015-11-30 |
| Brandy looks awkward as hell in the video. She suhold not try to do sexy. If you ain't got it, don't flaunt it . The song is wacked out. Her stuff in the 90s + 00s was ahead of it's time and so fresh. This is nowhere near that standard. Video reminds me of Kelly Rowland's Motivation. The only good thing is that she looks amazingly pretty Well even though I don't like it, I hope it's a hit as she deserves more success than she had when she used to be good! |
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