Goodbye, My Lover and My Friend Comments

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words to be seen not heard
Name: special K	2006-03-19
Good bye my lover and my friend, to you i send, clique words from a tired pen.

i still love
Name: Chantel	2006-04-07
i still will always love u even after u broke my heart so much.

to a boy that i loved
Name: melissa	2006-05-22
I love a boy once and i told that boy how much i loved him and he said i love you too boo.

word of love
Name: marissa	2006-07-04
good my lover goodbye my best friend i hope we met again and have opeing arms to a new begging and not a old misreable ending like this one

dnt call me dnt talk to me plz

Name: judith

2006-07-10

Goodbye my boyfriend
Goodbye my friend
I thought we could see each other again
I guess i was wrong
I gave u my love but didnt receive anything in the end
So bye for now and don't come back
You'll only end up hurting me again.
I loved you once i loved you twice but the second time
i realised u didnt love me.
so leave me alone i wont look back
just as long as you dnt hold me back.
i cant be that sad again it nearly killed me inside
so please dont call me, dont talk to me.
it would be better if was just alone, and away frm u.

Alright
Name: SheKeria	2006-08-03
I think this is a good peom it hit where it needed to hit and skipped what it needed to skip.

goodbye
Name: benny	2006-11-20
goodbye my love judith gona miss you have fun with that ota guy

i still love you
Name: lady lovely	2007-01-19
always love you boy and i'll always be there even if it has to be like a friend

iya
Name: samzie	2007-03-20
good poem it is well sweet

omg
Name: Jessica	2007-04-24
omg this is something special. I just wonder do you treat all girls this way. goodbye my lover and my friend

good bye my love
Name: babi gurl	2007-05-25
good bye my love we remeber all the times we had together i dont want to let u go but i guess u dont love me like i thought i love u and always will but good bye my love <3 xoxo

my hart
Name: elretha	2007-06-30
you broke my hart more then you realized you said you wouldn't do it again so why why why did you just jumped on it again didn't you realize my hart is fragile?

STILL
Name: IDAH MAJA	2007-10-24
I WILL FOREVER REMEMBER U EACH N EVERY MOMENT EVEN THOUGH U LEFT ME WITHOUT SAYING GUDBYE.

i miss u
Name: dolli	2010-05-26
beautiful poame abt lov nd nd for lovers.

Life
Name: Infinite Beauty	2010-07-14
Put some more life in your poem. It won't hurt to make it lively

rose
Name: ziad	2010-10-05
u steepen into my life without any permission,after a whil,e u broke my heart without mercy.ist my fault coz i loved u deeply and dedicated my life to u,now my love,ull be an old memorry,ull be alone again and ull face the broken arrow,no more tears and no more regrets,HEY life here i am

Borwn Eyes Sad Eyes
Name: Chelsea	2010-02-25
brown eyes, sad eys.I love you, I love you not. I want you, i want you not. I make you happy, i make you cry. Please just dont say goodbye.

love
Name: shauntae	2008-08-04
thats how true love always end but if it comes back its meant to be but if it doesnt it wasnt real

Loved u once nd always will
Name: Charne	2009-01-13
Ur da one my heart adore ur da one ive been lookin 4 nw ur gne ive found myself drowne in tears tht no one will c bt my y does did it happend 2 me

separated from my love
Name: broken heart	2012-02-17
A very touching poem. i luv and miss my guy so much now that he had to leave. i don't know when I'll meet him again. Why does there have to be separation and tears in love?

to my boo jess forever n always
Name: richie adams	2011-10-18
still love u n always will jess

So Nice
Name: Angel	2012-04-30
I really love this.

I CANT BELIEVE YOU DONT LOVE ANY MORE.
Name: Angel	2012-04-30
CANT BELIEVE YOU LIFT ME BECAUSE OF HER, WHAT DID I DO TO DESERVED THIS? CANT BELIEVE YOU DON'T LOVE ME AGAIN, I WILL ALWAYS LOVE YOU NO MATTER WHAT. I WILL NEVER FORGET YOU, EVEN THOUGH WE'RE NOT TOGETHER AGAIN. YOU WILL ALWAYS BE IN MY HEART, MY LOVE FOR YOU IS REAL, I GUSS YOURS WAS FAKE.

brk up
Name: tam	2012-11-25
i still luv em but he doesnt i stil have d threat of losing em even ven he is nt mine

luv is crap
Name: huh	2012-11-25
folish r thos people who luv lol ha ha ha

You have no trust at all
Name: Joshua	2013-03-19
I believed when you said i'll never break your heart but you did.i believed when u said i'll never break your heart again,when you said i apologise but you did it again.i believed when you said:me and you forever but now its over

I dnt need you ever again
Name: Xavi lebea	2013-03-19
I pray to God that you shuld never be part of my life,part of my body,part of my mind,part of my soul,part of my heart.

Goodbye
Name: Mvuselelo	2013-07-16
Quite nice .....short but the words r heavy!

i llve the peom
Name: Loveness	2014-12-01
i lv it and a'm nt jst loving it it reminds me of someone i hv loved so bad.it brough me tears even though i ddnt wnt 2.be i lv it

Make sure people can

Name: Maurine

2015-11-30

Make sure people can hear you. Learn how to loeosn and tighten the thingie on the mike that makes it go up and down, and adjust accordingly. Don't read too fast. Don't read too slow.Start with something funny (XJ Kennedy taught me this, though come to think of it has he written a serious poem?).Don't just mention all the faces you recognize; welcome and thank those you don't recognize.Some people can drink lots of high balls before a reading. I envy them because I have to be sober, or mostly sober. If you are a lightweight like me, hold off on the booze till after the clapping. Practice reading your poems a little bit before you get up on stage and belt them out. That way if you're nervous you might not lose your place or get tongue-tied. There's a special place in hell for those who disregard time limits.