Dreams Do Come True Comments

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i love it
Name: anuhea	2004-09-30
this is a great poem that i like alot

I could full
Name: tiffany	2004-12-24
i could full from a tree or full from a plane but the bust way to full is to full in love with you.

WOW
Name: ember	2005-05-29
wow nice poem, its great i just wish i could write like dat:)

what i think
Name: tucker	2005-06-23
ya it was ok nothing truely great,but i didnt hate it

wow
Name: niki	2005-06-25
i feel what your going through too i thought i found a true love outa state but i found nothing good either if thats what u mean

nice
Name: meeee	2005-09-11
i tink tis poem iz gd!:P

i love you nima

Name: mohaa bravo

2005-12-13

Dreams do come true, but only when
They make it through despair,
Limping into everyday
Transformed beyond repair.

No dream would be a dream if it
Could pass for something real,
Nor would we sail for paradise
Would it its shoals conceal.

So it is with love: the dream
Long longed for, now possessed,
Must be a dream no longer, but
An emperor undressed.

Stark naked it must come to us
In unaccustomed shame,
And we must take it in our arms
And love it all the same.

And we must love love as it is
That dreams might still come true,
Mangled into miracles
To make our lives anew.

i like it very much
Name: mohaa bravo	2005-12-13
i like it very much

Beautiful
Name: christina martin	2006-01-24
i thought this was a wonderful poem and dreams can come true!!!

so beautiful
Name: Jessica	2006-03-20
This poem was so beautiful!!!!!! Thank you for sharing it!

Dreams Do Come True...
Name: Kelsey	2006-09-08
Dreams do come true if you believe in them.....

Hello
Name: Melissa Cardova	2006-11-06
Yeah This poem I really don't get it But There is a question DID HIS DREAM COME TRUE OR WHAT THA HELL? But I guess.

My Poem-To Prove My Love Is True

Name: Dereks Gurl

2007-01-15

Written in Pen
Sealed With a kiss.
If you love me,
Please tell me this.
Do you love me?
Or do you not?
You told me once,
But I forgot.
Of all the guys I've ever met,
Your the one I won't Forget.
If I die before you do,
I will go to heaven and wait for you.
If you're not there by Judgement Day,
I will have known you went the other way.
I will give the Angels back their wings,
and risk the loss of everything.
Just to prove my love is true.
I will go to hell to be with you.

Hope you all enjoyed it, I wrote for my man. I love you Baby Boy.

I could fall
Name: britt	2008-01-02
The poem was great. Good job not a lot of people can write or think of poems like that or any other kind of poem.

LOVE
Name: CHACOLATE	2008-02-19
I HAVE A LITTLE UNIVERSE LIKE MY BANGARAM

WOW

Name: Tania

2008-05-24

That is the best poem I have read in a while! I am a big fan of writing love poems. I really hope your poem is true. Every night I dream about the boy I love. I want to make-out and have sex with him, but what I really want is for him to hold me and tell me he loves me. But I know this will probably never happen but for some reason I still have hope. I have more hope ever since I read this poem. Thank you so much. This is a poem I wrote, tell me if you like it (I really suck at writing poems but it helps me let out my feelings)

What can I say?
What is there
that you don't know.
You know how I felt
when I first saw you,
the energy that
grew in me.
Like a forest fire,
spreading fast
it was a new feeling
I didn't know
how to control it.
Over time
it burst into flames.
I let it all out,
my passion grew
so strong
there was no on else
to care for
Now look at us
everything wrong.
No water
and the fire left
to burn.
Why can't something
turn out my way.
Why can't my luck
be a litle better?
Because if there's anything
I really want forever,
I would have to say
the certain thing
is you.

lol wow
Name: steven	2012-04-02
anybdi kan be a gud writer dha onli thing Yu gta dø is put yur mind to it.

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Name: Beningnya	2012-12-09
While you're looking back in the rear-view mroirr, you're also looking up at the basement ceiling (or the living room floor) in this blog. Looking back helps one to look up and adjust one's perspective. There must be a poem that could connect the two Eagerly anticipating your long poem,Mom

Yah
Name: Nqo	2013-03-03
Yah I love it, it make me stay positive again, gud work.

The Greatest Mother

Name: Mira

2016-07-22

The Greatest Mother of all. Mom I will truly miss you and EVERYTHING about you. You helped to shape me into the person I am today. I owe you SO much. Words ca8#;n217&t express how much I love you and how much I will miss you. I will carry the torch for you, although I know I have Very big shoes to fill. I will make you proud. I LOVE you with ALL of my heart and soul and with every fiber in my body. Your Daughter. Vanessa.