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When You Said, "I Love You"
When you said, "I love you,"
I went over the moon.
My heart sang its glory,
The stars sang in tune.
As when with a word
God brought forth light,
So with these words
You ended my night.
So with these words
You made something new:
A bond of devotion
Between me and you.
How powerful words
To shape who we are!
We ponder in silence;
Our words cross a bar.
Your words crossed a threshold
And entered the past,
Yet they have created
A world that will last. |
| Nicholas Gordon |
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| me and my man |
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| Name: shalonda | 2005-03-01 |
| This is so true cause when my boyfriend told me he loved me. I thought i would die, i felt good that whole night i called all of my friends and told them. |
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| Name: sam | 2005-05-11 |
| how you said it it made me want to jump up and say i love you to!!!! |
| s0o0o0o sad |
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| Name: J.P. | 2005-05-11 |
| this is the saddest thing.. when I got up this morning I thought of this poem and I cried |
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