I Want to Make Your Heart Beat Just for Me Comments

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Confusing
Name: Jaynonia	2011-04-28
Ohhhh! Why can't boys just confess their feelings. They need to learn how to just tell the girl they like that they love them. It's not hard for girls. They need to do so that we aren't so confused. I just wish that boys weren't so confusing!!!

Poem
Name: anominous	2005-04-07
good job u pu t a lot of feeling and emotion. I liked the poem

poem
Name: lover	2005-05-24
this poem is very emotional with ur feeling. I love it and it makes u think about loving someone

xxxxxxxxxxxx
Name: xxxxxxxxx	2005-05-29
this is how i feel!!!!!!! n how i have felt 4 a long time. wow wot a grate poem well done xxxx

I loveyou
Name: maneka	2005-06-15
I love you

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Name: sxc	2005-10-30
das a pretti goot poem...

poem
Name: Lorenzo	2006-09-06
That was really good, which i had somebody as sweet as you. it was really nice

IM NEVER LETING GO
Name: AMNA	2006-11-25
IF U WERE MINE I WOULD HOLD U TIGHT AND WONT LET U GO CUZ I NO IF U GO TO HER SHE WONT GIVE U THE LOVE IM GIVING U (l)(k)

GR8
Name: Natilye	2007-03-06
this is a really gude poem...i can say that i have felt the same way b4 to

poem
Name: Lindsay	2011-01-19
this poem is just amazing. i love it. awesome job.

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Name: KayKAy	2009-10-01
That is how i felt until i told him how i felt he felt the same....we r so happy he told me he loved me just the other day....

amazing
Name: just me	2008-03-27
This poem Is the best it describes exactly how i feel this poem reli touched me i love it XxxxXxxxX

i love u
Name: sexy	2012-04-13
omg i just have a new boyfriend and i said to him i love u and guess wht he just asked me on a date so i said yes and i kissed him in the lips and his name is ken.i just hugged him ,i met him in the cafe.my age is 18 and his age is 19.when i be 20 and ken biss 21 we r going to get married.love u ken,omah

Pompalamasyon

Name: Pompalamasyon

2012-04-30

One of the (many) reasons why I gave up suitntmibg my poems to magazines was that when I did get an acceptance, the choice would be for the poem I'd included as filler rather than for the poem I wanted to see published.Truth is I don't read my poems the way other people read them. I know what my poems are supposed to be saying whereas the casual browser doesn't have such luxury. The poems I think are my best are the ones where I've worked in 2 or 3 layers of meaning/interpretation which work well for me, but which rarely work for the reader because they only spend enough time with the poem to get the surface meaning (if that).One of my most important poems (for me, anyway) has never been commented on in any detail, despite being posted to various fora and newsgroups. I assume it's because people are nervous of the content rather than because it's poorly written or just not likeable.I enjoyed Revelations on erato. I thought it was strange so many commenters are already trying to rank the selected poems. But it's nice to see poems being selected on their own merits, rather than on the hierarchical importance of the author.Today's verification: moodz.

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Name: Jiajing	2012-12-08
An idea in man is first impressed upon him and afrwaetrds expressed in things, but in God it is only expressed, not impressed, because it does not come from anywhere else.

In saying you lost

Name: Angrez

2014-05-22

In saying you lost its brhoetr / moving I think I am pretty sure that you mean it got lost when you yourself moved into a new house/apartment/location. But I also remember when my friend drove over a bridge with his family, and his foot was out the window for some reason, and he lost his shoe to the water below their moving car. So for when they got to their vacation destination, he only had one shoe. It just reminded me that you can lose something both actively and unintentionally. I like the idea in your poem that you're holding onto one part of something you know that will never be complete again. Alot of things kept in cars, at least for me, have silly sentimental value, and are both always sitting there and always moving with me.