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I Never Thought I'd Fall in Love with You Comments
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| Name: Carla Mao | 2005-02-01 |
As the present form of today passes away...
As minutes turn to hours..and hours turn to days..
As the rising sun collapses between the end of this world
and yesterday..
I learn to realize that I should be fortunate of
what I have today..
I'm sorry baby, if for granted I take your love...
And if I could make up for it...i'd give anything up..
But if I owned the whole wide world and even sky's above..
I would give you the beauty of shining horizons..the high rising
mountains..and the deep blue seas..
I would share with you the stars, the hallow moon and the glistening
sun..
And if only I could show you the love that I feel..
I would cry you rivers only you could heal..
And if you could only see the way my heart cries..
You'd always know what I feel inside..
So if time passes away..and I don't show you a thing..
Just remember if I had the world..
For only you..I'd give up anything.
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| daang |
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| Name: raquel A. | 2005-05-14 |
| wow u have a great talent your poem is very beautiful keep writing them your verrrry good at it:) |
| really good |
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| Name: ashley | 2005-05-18 |
| this was really good so keep uppp the work |
| nice |
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| Name: shorty | 2005-05-25 |
| this poem is very nice and so cute |
| Great |
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| Name: Jocelyn | 2005-06-12 |
| I think it was great and keep on the good work.... |
| AWSOME |
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| Name: Beckie | 2005-06-17 |
| this is like, such an awsome poeam.... its like....my exact words for my bf.... i think you could do great if you made heaps, and published a book...ill be the first to buy one!! your awsome |
| omg |
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| Name: claire | 2005-06-27 |
this poem is soooooooooooooooo gd
nd its all tru
evry single word
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| beautiful |
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| Name: Jennifer | 2005-10-22 |
| i wish i could write like you that was beautiful dont ever give up your passion to write you'll be famous one day |
| beautiful |
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| Name: mel | 2005-12-09 |
| this poem was absolutely beautiful with a doubt keep writing. |
| really good poem |
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| Name: raquel felix | 2006-04-11 |
| i like this cuz it is really romantic |
| wonderful |
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| Name: breona | 2006-04-17 |
both of your poems are very great they inspire me to be a better writter one day i think that you and the other people online have a great talent for what you'll do and keep up the good work and when you get emails and so forth i hope that keeps you motivaided it does me that way well i am just telling or rather writting you cause your poems are great and keep up the good work and keep doing it it will take you a long way
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| niiiiiiiiiice |
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| Name: april | 2006-07-02 |
| it is really good it really mach wit me.keep writing i want to read more of your poems! |
| this is wonderful |
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| Name: malakia | 2006-09-02 |
| keep up the good thing you are doing man |
| I love you |
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| Name: Brenda lara | 2007-04-18 |
| this poem was so romantic. |
| AWW. |
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| Name: Nikki | 2010-12-09 |
| this is sweet honest & inocent , this reminds me of when i was young |
| I LUV U |
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| Name: RED | 2011-01-19 |
| Never thrt tis day would come since the day i seen u at taco bell kml(insider)!! |
| love |
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| Name: Adah | 2011-01-27 |
| wow!! love is really amazing... |
| I NEVER THOUGHT I WOULD MET A GUY LIKE YOU |
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| Name: HALINA | 2009-07-12 |
| THE DAY I FIRST LOOK IN UR BEAUTIFUL BROWN EYES THAT'S THE DAY I FELL IN LOVE WITH YOU WHEN I SEE YOU I WAS SHY TO TALK TO YOU AND LET ME TELL YOU THAT I LOVE YOU MORE THEN ANYONE |
| damn |
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| Name: licous | 2009-12-16 |
| i love ur poem, its so beautiful it jus hits the perfect spot, i hope this isnt the last one we read of urs. |
| dang |
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| Name: nancy | 2010-03-09 |
dang i liked your poem
i would even use it myself for my babe |
| wow |
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| Name: ash | 2008-12-06 |
amazing
i relate to it SOOOO much |
| this poem is true |
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| Name: Juliet G. | 2009-03-31 |
| This poem is true because this happened to me a while back. It was about 1 1/2 years ago that I found my true love and I am still with him. I hope that I stay with him from now on. |
| wow |
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| Name: dominique | 2009-04-02 |
| i love dis so much i can relate to it deeply |
| Very Nice |
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| Name: Brittany | 2008-02-13 |
| I think it was a very deep and interesting poem! |
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