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Beautiful Eyes, Beautiful Face Comments
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| Name: Ye WeN | 2004-08-02 |
Nice poem...
Best 4 ur lover... |
| Love IT |
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| Name: EKJ | 2004-12-05 |
| I'm gonna give my this monday |
| boring |
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| Name: staz | 2004-11-14 |
made me fall asleep!
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| ME 2 |
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| Name: Ashlae | 2004-12-15 |
| I love your poem. Im hoping i have someone that ive been watch to be my boyfriend. And i total relate to your poem. |
| i loved it |
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| Name: chris | 2005-03-16 |
| this is a good love thing |
| FANTASTIC WHEN I READ THIS TO MY BEST FRIEND |
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| Name: ANNA | 2005-04-02 |
| WHEN I READ THIS TO MY BEST FRIEND WE BOTH FELT THIS WAS A AMAZING POEM KEEPUP THE NICE POEMS AND STAZ U DONT APPRICIATE POEMS |
| xoxo eyes |
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| Name: eilene | 2005-04-05 |
i like your poem it was really good i think you have skills.
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| good poem |
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| Name: aude | 2005-04-05 |
| hell you make a goodjob and keep doing this poems that are so beautiful. |
| nice |
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| Name: Shawn Williams | 2005-05-27 |
| really enjoyed your poem |
| BeauTY |
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| Name: Shehar bano | 2011-06-11 |
| Excelant poem |
| non romantic staz |
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| Name: amanda | 2005-08-25 |
| i thought it was absolutely beautiful |
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| Name: maz | 2005-10-13 |
| that was really sweet!, and staz, shut it! |
| luvly |
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| Name: alis | 2005-12-09 |
| lovley poem, keep it up;) :D |
| I like your poem |
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| Name: Rio-savannah | 2005-12-16 |
| i like your poem its very touching and loving i really like it |
| great |
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| Name: Sparky | 2006-02-08 |
| You are great |
| wow |
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| Name: wow | 2006-05-10 |
| ur really good at this. Keep it up! |
| WTH |
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| Name: bObO | 2006-05-17 |
Good Poem
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| Name: Julie | 2006-08-03 |
| dude,this shit has gotta make people cry!you gotta put more emotion and feeling into it!!!!this is fucking love,for crying out loud! |
| lovely |
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| Name: malakia | 2006-09-02 |
| send it to my lover |
| i ove this poems |
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| Name: laura | 2006-10-02 |
i like because is cute who i love tha good fine very good!!!!!!! &hearts ...
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| fineee |
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| Name: ortiz | 2006-10-02 |
| is cute i love this poems!!... |
| So many haters |
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| Name: Rachel | 2006-10-13 |
| All of the people who wrote criticism about this poem, shut up. You people obviously have no idea what poetry is about! Poetry is writing down the way you feel. Not about rhyming words, or making an interesting story out of it. It may not make sense to you, or you may not like it. But it takes courage, and guts to write a poem and then let the world see it! You should be more encouraging. It's pathetic how many people write comments just to put down other peoples work. Yes, it is your own opinion, but if it's not a helpful one, keep it to yourselves! I think this poem was a really nice one. Keep up the good work Nic. Anyone who would like to contact me on MSN, just add me: prettier_than_you_@hotmail.com. |
| LOVE IT ALOT |
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| Name: priya | 2006-11-07 |
| ty 4 this pome..it help to fix my love... |
| i love baby |
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| Name: tiffany | 2006-11-24 |
baby i just want to tell you how i feel from the first day i saw YOU LOOK AT me.
love ya
honey |
| LOVE |
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| Name: PAMMY | 2006-12-05 |
| I LOVE THIS POEM IS IS A GOOD ONE LOVE PAMMY |
| amazing |
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| Name: romantic | 2006-12-09 |
| Hey, 'boring' your wrong the poem was romantic and joyous. He showed that he could not love this womon but wanted to dearly!! |
| Your right |
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| Name: Brianna | 2006-12-09 |
| Hey, Rachel you are absolutly correct. I back you up one hundred percent. I thought what you said what absolutly amazing. That takes tru guts to say that on the worldwide internet. Even giving your e-mail address is showing greats amounts of courage. Just to say, keep writing POSITIVE stuff about Nic's poems. Even other poems that other people write. |
| your correct |
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| Name: Brianna | 2006-12-09 |
| By the way write me back on here -this goes along with your right |
| didnt get that far |
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| Name: umm | 2007-01-02 |
| was i ment to read down to the last word i didnt get that far |
| hmm yep |
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| Name: bell | 2007-01-02 |
| i thought it was interesting and i liked it |
| luvin it |
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| Name: stace | 2007-01-30 |
| i love dis poem its really romantic |
| it good |
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| Name: gina marroquin | 2007-02-27 |
i realy like the poem that you wrote i can realy relate to it and i know how u feel
if you have time and have more good poems you can talk to me by shari_lopez_girl@yahoo.com
i really would like to hear more of your poems |
| good job |
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| Name: moska | 2007-06-18 |
| i like the peom alot |
| love |
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| Name: darius | 2007-11-07 |
| this poem was sweet |
| Beautiful |
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| Name: Jovelyn Vertulfo Aquino | 2007-11-19 |
| I love it............. |
| love |
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| Name: amit nundlaul | 2010-07-22 |
| love is a war very to start but very difficult to end |
| NICE POEM |
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| Name: SOUMI GUPTA | 2010-10-21 |
| VERY NICE POEM FOR LOVERS WHO TRY TO IMPREES HIS/HER LOVER |
| defining the beauty of lover |
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| Name: sweet toucy | 2009-09-07 |
| such a nice poem |
| i like it |
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| Name: tre | 2008-10-01 |
its very in joyable its sweet but is it
dediceted to any one if u can comment bak .....
then do... |
| Cool |
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| Name: Ovo | 2008-10-05 |
| Just perfect 4 ur luver. |
| very impressive |
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| Name: Vladys | 2009-02-26 |
| I really like your poem, I think it says really nice things, although I think you should describe her eyes and her beautiful face at the sametime, It would be nice. very nicely done. |
| Luv it |
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| Name: Vinny | 2009-04-20 |
| I luv ur poem!! Oh,nd yeah! 2thos people that says this poems sucks,myt as wel sssshhhh ur filthy mouth!!! S if u can wryt a luv poem better than this.... |
| beautiful |
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| Name: busta | 2008-02-23 |
that poem wos so beautiful keep up the good work
it fixed my relationship with my girlfriend...... |
| really love that poem |
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| Name: jamie | 2008-03-06 |
| really good writing |
| very sweet |
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| Name: hisham | 2008-04-02 |
| wow beautiful poem is great very very lovely and sexy |
| cool poem |
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| Name: the | 2008-04-21 |
| i like the poem it is very nice and i like it a lot how may poems do you have because it is really good hope you have more like it. |
| nice |
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| Name: quejodes | 2008-04-29 |
| this is a nice poem..eh! =] |
| IM going to give this to mine on saterday |
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| Name: Kristine wigton | 2008-05-09 |
| this is so cute and it also is so true about luv and i give you a ten |
| Nice... |
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| Name: Manisha | 2012-02-04 |
| I Love it.... |
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| Name: yasir barni | 2012-03-13 |
Beautiful eyes, beautiful face,
I'm shy to talk to you.
You're the eagle I must watch
No matter what I do.
You're the beauty, wild and free,
The mistress of my eyes,
Rolling through exultant air,
Alone in pristine skies.
I would take you for my own
Could I but have your wings,
Could I but go where night begins
And frozen sunlight sings.
Could I but have you for my love,
How might we fly together!
But I must watch you from below
And long for you forever.
But I must be the one below
And long for you forever
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| Name: fazal akthar | 2011-12-18 |
| beautiful poem |
| By Sote8re Torregian |
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| Name: David | 2015-11-30 |
| By Sote8re Torregian(part of a larger work)On the cmipaagn trail ( the G. O. P.Who is there to speak, thento their lies and traduceries ? — The Wall of Respect in Chicago( still stands )The mother and her child still living ina cardboard packing crate still on the streetsin San Francisco( Ask herabout the state of the nation )The worker's lost hand or finger severed on the jobcalls out what about me ! ( By now too commonplace to be reported on in the news )Elizabeth Gurley Flynncalls yet from the speaker's platform – Rise up ! It is you who labour – not the Comprador– who are the measure Of HistoryHenry Winston blind prophet of the disinheritedthe new caste of untouchables in Americapoints at the accusers the deniersthe killers of the Dream in our midst!c1 toi le roseau d' Orphe9e — Andre9 Breton, Ode e0 Charles FourierFallen eagle feathers of the elders of the tribediscarded tin-cans empty beer-bottles fire-water of the young men thrown on The trash-heapat the Pine-Ridge Reservationgive testimony to promises made bythe white-man's forked-tongue take up the stumbling block out of the way( O young Republican StrategistMs. Kellyanne Conway, Georgetown U. grad !)These I call forth as Voices above the fraycopyright: Sote8re TorregianSept., AD2011 |
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