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Be Gentle: What You're Holding Is My Heart Comments
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| cute |
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| Name: vici | 2004-11-18 |
| that was a cute poem! YOU ROCK! |
| nice |
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| Name: amy | 2005-01-04 |
| this poem is great just like u....this poem rocks!!!! |
| love it |
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| Name: moipone | 2011-05-01 |
I love it.
Too nice and it made me cry |
| gimme a break |
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| Name: casie | 2005-03-12 |
| please bro thank God it was that short! someone call the poem police and arrest nick! |
| WOW that POEM |
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| Name: LATINOboy | 2005-03-18 |
Wow that poem touch me im gonna use it on my GIRL
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| confusing |
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| Name: sammi | 2005-04-05 |
| it dont make sence |
| cute |
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| Name: whitney | 2005-04-08 |
| i liked it but if i was u i would make a part 2 to it. it is really short and it ends werid |
| nice |
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| Name: yolanda perez | 2005-04-25 |
| this poem was beautiful i loved it dont listen to those people who put those bad things they're stupid. bye i love you. |
| POEM |
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| Name: ronahi | 2005-04-26 |
you know what guy if i ever try to make a peom it will take me 5 years just to figure out one line... your poem touched my heart...WOW!!! u have talent
and the guy that made fun of you let me see him try to make one BYHIMSELF without copying..... great job once again....PEACE...keep up th GREAT poems you might be a famous poet one day
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| a touching poem |
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| Name: Roxy | 2005-05-02 |
| I know exactly how u feel and wish that the person i care for will never hurt me but they always do.. ur poem really touched me |
| your poem |
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| Name: carmelchick | 2005-05-05 |
| it was good |
| sweet |
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| Name: Michelle | 2005-05-11 |
| They rox..There so sweet!! |
| good job |
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| Name: rachel | 2005-05-14 |
alright ur up on this one good job
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| GR8 |
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| Name: LOVE | 2005-05-26 |
| This poem has alot of meaning words.....it really goes into heart..well done...coz guess what...this is going to my boyfriend.... |
| great poem |
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| Name: ariana | 2005-05-26 |
| ur poem rocks and u probally rock as well poop u suck!!!!!!! |
| great |
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| Name: ive | 2005-06-01 |
i think that was good i geive some bad coments to others but urs is nice
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| okay |
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| Name: Mya Ruiz | 2005-06-02 |
| you could of added a little more. |
| This Poem Is Da BEST |
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| Name: Imad | 2005-06-03 |
| i lve dis poem it is soo cool |
| not bad |
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| Name: myself | 2005-06-04 |
| the title is awsome, but he rest has potential |
| hot |
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| Name: jessy | 2005-06-08 |
| i love this poem .. |
| awsome |
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| Name: Shono | 2005-06-09 |
| thats a really cool poem!<333333333 |
| Good work |
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| Name: Jocelyn | 2005-06-12 |
| I think it was good but u need to work on it a lil bit more... I didn't feel your heart in it... If u want to write back I'm at (babygurrl4788@yahoo,com |
| Really cute |
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| Name: Kimberly-Ann | 2011-05-29 |
i love this poem.So sad...i almost cried.
Kimberly-Ann xoxoxo |
| Omg |
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| Name: Haily | 2011-05-29 |
| Omg!! So saad!! i really LOVE this poem. You ROCK!!!!!!!! |
| well done |
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| Name: ianthe | 2005-07-05 |
though I had never heard of your name, your poem touched my in the heart, well done. Only very few people have touched me in such a way.
Congratulations |
| love |
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| Name: chassity | 2005-08-03 |
Be gentle: What you're holding is my heart.
Remember in your honesty my pride.
If you don't want to see me, please don't hide
The truth, yet tell it with some art.
Though you may not have asked for me to call,
A single leap of hope must be allowed.
Not easily are shy songs sung out loud.
Yet now I wait alone outside your wall. |
| love it |
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| Name: tasha | 2011-06-11 |
| I love it just as I love my husband |
| Touching |
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| Name: Sarah | 2005-08-19 |
| Ye.. That poem was great it had a story behind it, it was very touching! |
| sweet |
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| Name: kals | 2005-08-22 |
| cute, you really know how to write sweet poemes |
| lovely |
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| Name: Ishaq nassereddin | 2005-08-27 |
| that was alovely poem of a heart broken lover |
| ummmm ii dont like it but otha ppl might........... |
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| Name: ok........ | 2005-09-22 |
| i dont like it but otha ppl might........... |
| lovely |
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| Name: jo-elle | 2005-09-24 |
| that made me think that i want a guy like that |
| e-mail |
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| Name: jo-elle | 2005-09-24 |
| if any body has a e-mail add me jj98853071@hotmail.com |
| Thats Cutteee |
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| Name: Megan jefferies | 2005-09-29 |
| I Liek this Poem it reminds me of alot of things u did a great job on wrting poetryy... keep it upp Great Workk |
| the wet peaom was funny |
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| Name: megan | 2005-09-29 |
| hahah tahst poem poop made upwas funny hahahahaha |
| I like |
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| Name: christina m | 2005-10-06 |
| I love ur poem a| |
| great |
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| Name: vidi | 2005-10-24 |
| this poem is truly great, my friend. |
| hhhhhmmmm |
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| Name: vlado | 2005-10-27 |
| badly sweetish |
| i love this poem |
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| Name: terri | 2005-10-28 |
| takes alot of thought to write a peice like this... thank you |
| awesome |
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| Name: lisa | 2005-10-30 |
| i love that poem. i thought it was so great. i wish i could write poems like that. |
| sxe babe |
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| Name: lickerish | 2005-11-06 |
| dat poem really sucked and i could have done better |
| Good |
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| Name: Jess | 2005-11-08 |
| I really like it its a good poem!!You should here mine!! |
| wow |
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| Name: Bibo | 2005-11-19 |
| this rocks, if u say it sucks, think again & dez something wrong in ur head CUT!! |
| sensational |
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| Name: j.p | 2006-01-22 |
| its got a really good meaning to what it is relating to.. |
| nice poem |
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| Name: Dinesh | 2006-01-25 |
| that was simple and short.. good poem, |
| i love it |
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| Name: Terry | 2006-02-11 |
| i like ur poem it cheered my girlfriend up thank you ever so much u made her day xxxxxx |
| pooooo |
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| Name: zoe | 2006-03-23 |
| i just read that to my girlfriend and she started to cry because it was so poor. i read it to her whilst she was standing in a cew at a very bust 'std' clinic. |
| amazing |
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| Name: your love | 2006-04-17 |
| I luv your poem it's so touching and romantic.....u will never know who i am but i like u alot |
| good |
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| Name: abbster | 2006-05-05 |
| its good to read keep writing love poems |
| fab |
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| Name: kenie | 2006-06-30 |
| for the sake of my man,its fa-bu-lous |
| This Poem |
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| Name: Cassie | 2006-10-19 |
| I think that this was a good poem. it could really hit mhome for some people. |
| afterthought |
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| Name: efa | 2006-11-22 |
| well u r nt very precise at expressing ur feelings.. i m sure u feel MORE dan dat.. y nt say it?... dat creates a vacuum in da poem... gud but incomplete... |
| nice |
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| Name: ashley | 2006-11-24 |
| this was a nice and sweet poem!! it rocks!! |
| um... |
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| Name: Caitie | 2006-12-06 |
Thats cute... I dont like the part where u say, if u dont want to see me dont hide... if they have your heart then shouldnt they want to see you? and be with you always?? I know my babe does..
Cute anyways.. Good Job... |
| Wow.. |
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| Name: Jen | 2006-12-06 |
| I love the first linee .. the " Be gentle: What you're holding is my heart " , its so cuteee :) .. Good Jobbb |
| romantic |
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| Name: romantic | 2006-12-09 |
| This is a very romantic poem that shows your feelings |
| cute |
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| Name: michelle perera | 2006-12-22 |
| that was a cute poem! YOU ROCK! |
| sooo awsome |
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| Name: jothi | 2007-01-09 |
dis is a reli great poem soo cute
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| hey |
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| Name: maria | 2007-01-20 |
| hey i really lyk ur poem keep it up |
| good |
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| Name: Amber | 2007-01-28 |
| i really loved this poem because i could really relate to it..... it was very beautifull. |
| poem |
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| Name: Amber | 2007-01-28 |
take time to flirt,
its the love,
between two people |
| be gentle what u a holidng is my heart |
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| Name: joe | 2007-02-05 |
| if this gal is still out there, dont let her pass u by. |
| kitty |
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| Name: Meagan | 2007-02-19 |
| It wa alright but it needs more love phrases...but it was preety good. |
| love is true |
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| Name: vera | 2007-02-20 |
| this was a great poem |
| awsome |
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| Name: Isaiah | 2007-02-25 |
| this poem is the bomb |
| sucks |
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| Name: you really suck | 2007-03-23 |
| my grandma could do better |
| oky |
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| Name: Brittnei | 2007-04-09 |
| this poem was oky it could have been better |
| sort of ok |
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| Name: sam | 2007-04-12 |
| yeah this poem was ok |
| a great poem |
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| Name: kiki | 2007-05-01 |
| true insperation |
| this poem is very good..... |
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| Name: hannah hawley | 2007-10-16 |
| When i frist looked at this poem i was thinking it was boring but its nice. and you most have time to do this stuff. i just wanted to say good job............bye for now.........ByHannah Hawley |
| NO SENCE |
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| Name: JAKE | 2007-11-05 |
IT REALLY MAKES NO SENCE I AM LOOKING FOR A POEM 4 MY GIRLFRIEND
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| very heart felt |
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| Name: Amanda | 2007-12-12 |
| i really liked it. it touched my heart. i write love poems myslef and i'd have 2 say u did a very nicce job. extremely sweet. and to all u who said it sucked... SCREW YOU!! |
| cute |
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| Name: ryan | 2010-06-30 |
nce poem.......
has meanin |
| be gentle |
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| Name: joshua B. Ocampo | 2010-07-19 |
| wow nag lvlup kana |
| love |
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| Name: katherine | 2010-11-15 |
i think thats nice im gonna write that down and give it to him
thanks |
| wow |
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| Name: Kym | 2009-06-03 |
| wow this is a cool poem this is 4 ma bf yh luv u kxx |
| aww |
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| Name: tee tee | 2009-08-11 |
| DIS IS REALLY KUTE ND DEEP |
| good |
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| Name: jorge | 2009-12-09 |
| i love this poem for a girl in my school |
| Really Nice |
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| Name: Thikhoane Molapo | 2009-12-10 |
| This poem makes me feel alive eternally! |
| good |
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| Name: Love | 2008-06-10 |
its not that good but nice try
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| dis poem |
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| Name: liton | 2008-10-05 |
| its gd but can use mre rymes |
| nice |
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| Name: simone | 2009-04-01 |
| this poem is really cute..good work..fuck the poop guy who made u feel stupid..keep up ur work |
| heart broken |
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| Name: sad eyes | 2008-04-07 |
| i wish that was true in my life |
| Confused |
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| Name: pocahontas | 2008-04-29 |
| I thought these were suppose to be love poems?? |
| sweet |
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| Name: chris clingman | 2008-05-22 |
| it made me and my girlfriend cry |
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