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Please Don't Spaz if I Should Ask You Out Comments
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| Name: jade | 2005-04-16 |
| that was cool the title made me laugh! |
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| Name: person | 2005-11-23 |
| It's so lame add something else to it- change it it's too long rewrite it |
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| Name: monkey | 2006-01-11 |
| well your poem was kool, I really loved it who cares about wat other people think, you just keep on writting your love or falling in love poems. |
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| Name: Renee | 2006-04-03 |
Hey you people dont need to be so mean when it comes to poems they come from your heart and everyone can write what they want. Dont be so hard on people and judge whats good and whats not. I liked the poem pesonally. I write poems also and have my own book so i know what writing them is all about! Be nice to people!
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| Name: tanina | 2006-10-12 |
| i like it it describes me and this guy i like i want to ask him out to |
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| Name: poets r us | 2007-08-29 |
hi there!
this really touched our hearts, especially the use of the word spaz. This is a metaphor of which pathway to take in life. She is unsure which one to take but decides upon the second one. We think the message in this poem is to choose your own pathways and not follow other people’s decisions. Also perhaps this is a caution to make your choices carefully because you cannot change the past. Perhaps he is feeling frustration at the fact that you cannot take both of the “pathways” and she is always thinking about what would have been if he were to take the other option. She says that in the future perhaps he will try the other path but inside he knows he probably won’t have that opportunity; "If she likes the guy, I mean, why wait? Taking risks is what it's all about."
basically. Your poetry skills are un-canny and amazing..and we are considering using this as a introduction to our novel.. "poetry..the lyrics of the soul"
how would you feel about this..
please get back to us.on....
bonnie_williams@toorakc.vic.edu.au or
ronitte_collyer@toorakc.vic.edu.au
thanks again.
sincerely from your friends..
POETS 'R' US!
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| Name: hazel | 2010-05-18 |
| Well let me say tht I really liked the poem .. And all u ppl talking trashh need 2 stOp and get a lifeeeee . And as for the poet your a very talented person and keep doing your thing x3 |
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| Name: Meh | 2010-05-25 |
This was Great I replaced he could ask girl and she said If I ever MEET The GIRL Who Will Say YES! to MEH
I'll Want Say Thanks Because I One Say Yes but were no longer because she was on the way home from the night I gave it to on this doubledate I did with a Friend of hers and mine and she died on the way home, so if I ever meet another girl who will say YES! I dream of that Day that could see that you write a poem like this about purposing to her let me know or anyone who has one they could do hit me up at my email or girls if your single and like to know more hit my email at good4thosewhowait@yahoo.com
THANKS Who Ever Wrote This :)
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| Name: Gina | 2009-06-15 |
| Okay, I guess. Not as good as the last one I read of yours. |
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| Name: julie | 2009-08-14 |
| well i like what you siad it just didtn flow well sorry |
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| Name: NikkiKenZ | 2009-11-27 |
| I Really Liked this one. I guess Because I really Understood It and Can relate to it :) |
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| Name: Someone | 2010-03-01 |
Ummmm its not that good but ya like nice try.... :)
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| Name: Jef | 2012-02-21 |
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| Name: Premalatha | 2012-02-22 |
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| Name: MYm | 2012-02-23 |
| Hi there! Would you mind if I share your blog with my mypasce group? There's a lot of folks that I think would really enjoy your content. Please let me know. Thank you |
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| Name: Chrstina | 2011-08-28 |
| I LOVED IT :D XXXOOO |
| teen in love |
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| Name: Marko Strbac | 2011-10-09 |
| i love this poem |
| i love myself |
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| Name: Ben Cave | 2011-10-09 |
| i loved this poem!! omg im gonna tell it to myself in the mirror everytime i go into the shower. it just makes me so happy!! |
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| Name: Marko Strbac | 2011-10-09 |
| I AGREE WITH THE COMMENT ABOVE TOO. thanks for the idea :) |
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