All I Ever Wanted Is in You Comments

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good
Name: kriistiinE	2004-07-15
Very good poem but if u want people to believe that please make it longer..... thank u

the poem
Name: linda	2004-09-17
the poem was alright but try to rhyme a little bit more

great
Name: anuhea	2004-09-30
it was a great poem that i thought was pretty good, get to me as soon as u get this !!!

borring
Name: erin	2004-10-31
i dont like it is borring not much life

wonderful
Name: briannah	2004-12-07
the poem was great i love it

huh
Name: lil shorty	2004-11-11
wat its short and i didnt get it wat!!

Good
Name: Jessica	2004-11-19
U need to make it sound like a love story!!

the pome
Name: shalonda	2004-12-15
try tp make people feel the pome.

love it...
Name: heather	2011-04-07
that was really good poems loved it..

good
Name: carol	2005-01-02
i agree wid Kriistiin it needs to be longer try to express ur self wid this peom more but other wise its good

relations
Name: LiN-dUh	2005-01-08
..this poem relates exactly to my life right now im in love with this guy named josh and this poem describes basically everything thats going on between me and him right now..

Gangsta
Name: Scooby	2005-01-13
The poem was very good and just keep on doing what you doing and I got one more thing to say is that you on your way to the top

my life
Name: cheryl	2005-01-23
i liked it very much,cause it's similar to me

great one
Name: cheryl	2005-01-23
A very great poem keep it up

longer
Name: JaredsBbyGrl	2005-01-26
it's really cute but i think that it needs some work. it needs to be longer.

cute
Name: britney	2005-02-18
very cute!

not the good
Name: jessica	2005-02-21
try to put more of rhyme

all i wanted is you
Name: cyrenne	2005-02-22
your poem is to short

touching
Name: casie	2005-03-12
nick, this poem is soooo touching are u going to make it long? i hope you do it's sweet it says what a heart in love would have said!

great
Name: mineka	2005-03-12
It's a really great poem.Good things can come in small packages and this is one of them.

very good
Name: steve	2005-03-19
this a teh best poem i have heared in a long time

caw-utee
Name: sara	2005-03-21
i love it mannn

good
Name: michelle	2005-03-29
the poem is good because it explains that all you want is the love of your partner

Its nice
Name: Tarsha	2005-04-01
The Poem was short, but it had a great meaning!!!!

lovely
Name: steph pringle	2005-04-10
lovely poem relli gets 2 the heart

love it or hate it
Name: angie rodriguez	2005-04-18
i really didnt like it didnt even get it!!!!!!

wonderfull
Name: Yesenia	2005-04-20
This poem made me think for a while and i relaize how much i need me boyfriend back!!!!

it sucked
Name: joanne	2005-05-03
this poems has nothing to do with the love life a person so i think that you need to work on this poem of yours.

all i ever wanted is you
Name: baby	2005-05-04
it's choo sweet

good
Name: carmelchick	2005-05-05
this is a good poem keep it up gurl

aight
Name: Percelia	2005-05-12
this poem was only alright, but it really needs to be a little longer, because i don't really get it. It's kind of boring at the end though.

poem
Name: Marsha	2005-05-16
the poem was good, you have a talent, use it from experience you really is good. i read another of your poems and it was wonderful.

very nice
Name: mukesh	2005-05-20
this poem is really heart touching.

always
Name: tracy	2005-05-21
always show how true you are even in your poems

not so good
Name: nightbebe	2005-05-25
the title was good but try to make your poems more longer, interesting, and out more rhymes in it.

the poem
Name: ivona	2005-06-01
m........ i dont like it it makes no sence and no afence

itss cute
Name: Jessicaa	2005-06-03
i likee that poeme ... its cute ... but you should probably make it longer. .. =)

alright
Name: Paulin	2005-06-03
the poem was cute but i agree with Kristine it was to short

........
Name: Alicia	2005-06-06
well... i think there should be things added in the poem... but other then that its good

hey
Name: nicole	2005-06-10
i was awesome and i LOVED it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

cute
Name: karen	2005-06-11
this poem is so cute!!!

cute
Name: bill	2005-06-15
great poem

wow
Name: noluvuyo moni	2011-06-01
this poem reminds me of my baby's father YANGA TYOSHE who ran away from us to jhb

really nice
Name: mini	2005-06-18
it was a really nice poem and very heart-warming!

alright
Name: becki	2005-06-29
i thought the poem was not that good it should be longer and and rhyme abit more

good
Name: ladezia	2005-06-29
i really liked that poem

kool
Name: jess	2005-07-04
this poem is rlly good they dont all have to rym well keep up ya good work cant wait to read ur next one luv jess

Amazing poem
Name: Kenneth m khoza	2011-06-08
It's a good poem ,really nice poem it's for your lost lover.

Awesome
Name: Stacey	2005-07-05
this poem is great!!!!!! it got me my boyfriend.... michael. thanks so much!

O.k
Name: Holly	2005-07-12
This poem wasnt the best ive heard it was o.k. but i could be better

Poem
Name: BrItTaNy	2005-07-14
i Love Your poem is awesome!

awseomest
Name: tearia	2005-07-14
yea i really like the poem it was nice short n sweet but to make it more loving is to make it longer and to let that some one u love him more then that

good...
Name: vee	2005-07-20
i think that this poem is very good but it needs more to it to make it perfect.

safe
Name: latisha	2005-07-23
dis poem is safe but it needs sum flow gurl

okie
Name: halze	2005-07-26
well for one it should ryme alot more then that hunney and at the end where it says wonder of my tears it should be wonder of my YEARS babskie ok bye

liked it
Name: cierra	2005-07-28
the poem was good i likes it but it needs to be more longer tho.

poem
Name: sweetnessofpeggy	2005-08-12
it was very cute

poem
Name: bailee	2011-06-20
i thought it was a great poem :)

cool
Name: Stacey D	2005-08-16
i agree with kriistiinE she has a good scorce of reading!

short but sweet
Name: danielle	2005-08-17
if this poem was a little bit longer and rhymed more then it would b used evry valentines day as it is very sweet.

its okey
Name: MOna	2005-08-27
the peom was okey but i agree with kriistiinE to make it much longer.

the poem
Name: claire forshaw	2005-09-02
it was good but, i didnt enjoy it very much bcoz it needs 2 rhyme more i enjoy rhymes

I like it
Name: Bach	2005-09-12
it displays my feelings so well in so little words too.You can explain anything with many words but it gets a little more to do it so simply.

eww
Name: Shankaz	2005-10-01
that waz suky i've heard better from a 9 year old n dat 9 ur old is me u suk

pft
Name: natalia	2005-10-11
i dnt get it :-\|

POEMMMM
Name: PRISCILLA	2005-10-14
THIS IS REAL BEATIFUL ME AND MY HUSBAND LOVE IT

cute poem
Name: jEweLle	2005-10-14
for me I think the poem is a little bit boring but it was sooh! very short try your best to make ir more longer....

nothing
Name: nonna yo buisness	2005-10-19
it was ok i think the tear part was good but u should make iot longer

it was good
Name: nicki	2005-10-25
this is a good poem but it has to be longer i think if u do that and then it will be the best

errm
Name: Jemma	2005-10-27
ok poem.. not very origional though?

poem
Name: amelia	2005-10-28
right i am going to be honest here, is it a joke? well if its not i think you should give up being a poet because quite frankly you cant wriete a poem

All i Ever Wantedis is in you
Name: Rashid	2005-11-04
I thought it was grate keep up the good work..

excellent
Name: alexandra	2005-11-04
it was one of the best poems that i've read for a while nice job keep up the good work!

alrite
Name: jenna	2005-11-09
it was great poem but need 2 be a bit longer n e poem aint a poem aint a poem wid out bout 2-3 verses but it s iz gd

Stupid
Name: Miah	2005-11-22
that pome was so stupid

poem short
Name: calm	2005-11-26
this poem speaked to me but is wasnt enough

okay
Name: lulu	2005-12-02
Try to make the poem a little longer and make it have more sense.

nice
Name: stacy	2005-12-02
this is cute and sweet.. keep it up..

plz
Name: Paul	2005-12-05
plz could u make this powm longer and try to rhyme mre then i will like it much betta but apart from dat i love itxxxxxxxx

LALA
Name: LEEA	2005-12-07
IT WAS VERY GOOD OH DONT LISTEN LINDA BECAUSE MY LIFE IS BASICALY REVOLED AROUND POETRY AND MOST POEMS ARE USUALLY IN THE ORDER OF A-B-A-B-B.

the poem
Name: sheila	2005-12-14
It needs to be longer. It doesn't really feel all that heart-felt either. Show your true emotions more clearly and the poem will be awesome.

here it goes....
Name: Whittney	2005-12-18
the poem is indead good but it is not long enough and does not live up to its name

about the poem
Name: selena	2005-12-29
well its good but needs to be a little longer

Awesome
Name: Samantha	2006-01-08
I love this poem it is very swee,also it makes a lot of since!!!

not bad
Name: sophie	2006-01-13
i think your poem need so ryhme a little bit more but other than that it was great

iight
Name: yummy	2006-01-14
it was ahright but make it longer and make it rhyme

hey
Name: gladis	2006-02-03
i just want to say i like your poem i think its really good and one day i woud want to be a writer

all i ever wanted is in you
Name: kevin	2006-02-23
best poem

kool
Name: alaysa	2006-03-01
thats ok but depressing

i like it
Name: juantio	2006-03-14
i like this poem its not super long and its sweet

Romantic
Name: Tahsa	2006-04-06
I't was good but it seems like you depend in the person you love alot and sometimes it's not good.Bacause then how are you going to survive on your own two feet?No direspect!

nice
Name: Katiie	2006-04-13
nice,but make it a little longer..thannks

o.k.
Name: lashirl spencer	2006-04-24
the poem was not very cute it was kind of boring

too short
Name: T.I QUEEN	2006-04-27
the poem was alright but make it a little longer let every one you got it

cute
Name: marisol garcia	2006-04-27
the peom is good but you need to add more to it

im in love with staysie
Name: chathan	2006-04-27
i liked you before you liked me. payton said if i was older you like me. im 10 years old.and thats the truth.i like you so much.you are so pretty. will you go out with me?

exallent
Name: kassandra	2006-05-15
that poem was good but needs to be longer

lovley
Name: becca	2006-06-29
this is soooooo sweet becca

this poem
Name: kay	2006-07-14
this is a really good poem it means a lot.

nice
Name: Tony	2006-08-06
It was okay I'll give it 6/10.

cool
Name: sarah	2006-08-08
i really like that poem it was lovely

hey
Name: ericka	2006-08-11
one word cute

kindasorta
Name: Brandon	2006-09-04
hey that was a pretty good poem, but like the others said, make it longer and rhyme better/more.

great
Name: tommo	2006-09-22
i lyk dis peom it touched me

good
Name: tash	2006-09-26
it is good u just needs to make it longer and make it rhyme

.. . .
Name: Rachel	2006-10-13
Linda... Poems aren't about rhyming! It's about writing what you feel. Your emotions!!!

ur poem
Name: Jess	2006-10-18
i thought that it was very good just coming out of a break up and this made me rilize what he ment to me and i thank you for that

beautiful
Name: adriana	2006-10-21
i love that poem and who says that poems are all about rhyme.

good
Name: julie wynn	2006-10-23
this is such a good poem it really explains alot

TiS 0r8
Name: T-Babie	2006-11-07
aww its pretty cute i think :)

pretty good
Name: Younen	2006-11-10
i really like it...just give it alittle more feeling to it!

thats gold
Name: rachael	2006-11-13
hey ur poem is so sweet my guy had tears in his eyes wen i told him :)

mhmmmmm
Name: sally	2006-11-20
mhmmm....not to bad....

good
Name: kayla	2006-11-24
i didn't really understand the poem... so there for i didn't really like it that much!! make it longer

CCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCC
Name: AAEECCRRFE	2006-11-29
it was good i suppose!

good
Name: Baby Gurl	2006-12-18
I think that is a great poem!

perfecty
Name: chelsea	2006-12-21
it was verry good perfect

sad
Name: Natz	2006-12-21
it was pretty good but sad as

Very Sweet
Name: Maegen	2007-01-07
sweets the last line kinda doesnt really feel all there...i mean it doesnt fit u know...doesnt flow wit the rest of the poem too well... on the whole it was rather sweet...

poem
Name: georgia	2007-01-17
id rather be hated for who i am... then loved for who i am not

gud gud
Name: ceara	2007-01-19
you need to make the poem a bit longer not just 5 lines long thankz and the poem was really good

great
Name: nate	2007-02-10
it was really tuching in so many waves

beautiful
Name: bob	2007-02-10
i lovee this poem it is so beautiful and sweet it reminds me of someone i like allie hagerty

thats very cute
Name: ashlEE	2007-02-21
i guess you could say that im goin out with a really amazing guy that i only met 3 months ago and im falling completely in love with him. and i think all these things about him!!!!

good
Name: nessa	2007-03-07
i really like this poem because it explanes how i feel for my boyfriend

meh
Name: kassandra	2007-03-15
its ok but it has to be longer with more rhyme and stuff but still good

Cute
Name: Unknown	2007-04-04
linda, not all poems have to rhyme...So what ever you think is wrong. You dont have to rhyme a poem smart one...so next time, think before you speak

hollister
Name: Cathy	2007-05-16
umm well if u wamt the truth to bad

best
Name: syrus	2007-06-08
really good its remind me of my past

comment for lindas comment below...
Name: Jennifer	2007-06-19
poems dont have to rhyme at all...its a small or big thought on paper about how you feel, there are no rules or regulations of if it rhymes or not.

GOOD
Name: INNOCENT ME	2007-08-28
YOUR POEM WAS IIGHT BUT U GOT TO MAKE IT RHYME ALITTLE BIT AND U GOT TO MAKE IT A BIT LONGER. AND DONT USE WORDS LIKE THAT, USE SIMPLE WORDS THAT PEOPLE COULD UNDERSTAND. AND THE POEM WILL TURN OK NICE

ha good
Name: amy	2007-10-29
im look ing for won for him im 11 so not right for me but it is still all true

i agree with Linda
Name: Joni	2007-11-01
Lovely poem, but i agree with Linda! two more lines would have done it for me . . .

ALL RIGHT
Name: JAKE	2007-11-05
I COULD FIND BETTER BUT PRETTY GOOD

ohh
Name: care bear	2007-11-08
its cool i guess

OUTSTANDING
Name: SHANTERIA LEE	2007-11-29
YOUR POEM WAS VERY GREAT, BUT YOU SHOULD EXPRESS YOUR SELK MUCH MORE THEN WHAT YOU DID!!!

poem
Name: spon	2011-03-19
good. it was all right but could have been longer

AWESOME
Name: Carolyn	2010-05-01
This poem is AMAZING! And so are your other ones! Please tell me your trying to get this tuff published? Its wonderful!

idk
Name: elisa villanueva	2010-06-16
ummmm it was okay except for tha ending haaa

i luv my bay matt
Name: carrie	2010-06-23
i luv my baby matt alot lot-lot

okay
Name: nequa	2010-09-04
it was okay but yea yu should make it longer so i can feel what you are saying.!

cud improve
Name: monisha	2010-09-04
it's nce!but it cud hve bn mor romntic

cute
Name: kelsie	2010-09-14
how sweet is that i love it

One Word
Name: Maha Hamdan	2010-10-10
So touchy... So expressive...

The poem ok
Name: Destiny	2010-11-28
Your poem wuz ok but could of ben longer to make it better

hmm
Name: Jodie Lynn	2009-05-30
its ok it just sounds a lil idk but it could have used a lil more

ehh
Name: emma	2009-07-05
not tht great...iv done and seen alot better, sorry

For the guy Nicolas
Name: The Wasif	2009-08-01
if any1s gunna get awarded in this website, for poems, its gunna be u dude, keep it up.

good
Name: kalah	2009-08-06
your poem is really good i like poems like that

perfect
Name: sama	2009-09-27
I like it :)

good
Name: megan	2009-10-20
the poem was reali good but you should expand on it by makinf it longer.

EHH
Name: BrittanyDeanna	2010-02-05
it was okay....better than what i could do prob

suck
Name: nathan	2010-02-25
i honestly really thing you could have done better sorry

not bad
Name: Billythekid	2008-07-24
short and sweet and like dat;-)

good
Name: mtweet	2008-07-27
i liked it it was kinda of a song

Nice
Name: Thato	2008-08-18
Its a great poem like the first part but the rest is also good

hey
Name: sheryl	2008-08-23
Hey that was a good pome thank you that was a nice thing to wrigt!

Love Poems
Name: Victoria Johnson	2008-09-16
I love to read about love because you do not know if someone likes you but they do not tell you in your face. They try to keep it a seaceret. You will now when they ask you to marry them. you will allways say "yes I will marry you". You will not say NO I wont marry you.

Wow
Name: Camille	2008-09-22
this poem was iight but still needs a little more

ok could be better
Name: madzda	2008-10-07
it was a bit boaring but yer if you really want people to like it make it longer and gop into depth abit more

poem
Name: kimberly	2008-10-13
love the poem remind it of me!!!

kool
Name: laws	2008-10-13
nice i like it kould be better thogh but well done

awesome
Name: paige	2008-10-28
this poem is really cute!!! thanks for letting the world read it!

2 short
Name: Mark	2008-11-04
No comments just that it wuz 2 short

about da poem
Name: Elvira	2008-12-04
it was good 4 ideas 4 my friend. thank u very much.

gdgd
Name: Elvira	2008-12-04
it was ok it needs 2 be longer

so sad
Name: beth	2009-01-14
i love this poem oh my god i luv it

love
Name: Danisha	2009-04-22
I like love peom thank you

HHHHHHHHHH
Name: NON YA	2009-05-07
I DONT GET IT

nice
Name: farah shan	2008-06-06
nice poem but needs 2 b mre love

good
Name: tasha	2008-06-06
but if u want people to understand were u coming from make it longer or give more feelings

asowem
Name: bri	2008-01-22
i love this poem

great
Name: chula	2008-01-31
that is a good poem

COOL
Name: LIL MZ PESTO	2008-02-08
It was aiight ai..buh could du bettah...

poems
Name: Amber	2008-02-11
your poem needs to be a little longer

BLEW
Name: BEAUTIFUL	2008-02-15
IT WAS AN OK POEM

CUtE
Name: JUDy	2008-02-20
VERy CUtE POEM ONLii iT WULD HAVE BEEN BEttA iF iT WAS A LiL LONqER

love it
Name: Eli Vega	2008-03-15
I love the peem ALOT Ilove sweet poems like this

Sometimes
Name: Ashlee Hansen	2008-03-20
~Sometimes I cry~ ~Sometimes I lie~ ~I never want to say goodbye~ ~You were my life~ ~You made me cry~ ~Just don't know what to do~ ~With the tears in my eyes~ ~Bot you were mine~ ~It took me a while to find~ ~The guy you were trying to hide~ ~You always but me through a bind~ ~It just killed me inside~ ~That I couldn;t have you in my mind~

Good
Name: Mo Lester	2008-04-19
Not bad pretty, short, and sweet

jkjhkjhlj
Name: ljhg	2008-04-30
nooooooo i dont

true love
Name: gwguss	2008-05-08
its a poem ture lovers wud luv to raed

cute
Name: chris	2008-05-22
i love it and my girlfriend will love it to

good
Name: jenna	2012-03-17
all yall that said u dont like it is haters bc this is rlly good yous just mad bc u cant do this as good as her keep it up good job girl

good
Name: jenna	2012-03-17
all yall that said u dont like it is haters bc this is rlly good yous just mad bc u cant do this as good as her keep it up good job girl

love poem
Name: celestina	2012-10-23
i wish my boyfriend will love me so most you so sweet babe and i love you