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How Can I Say What Is Too Much for Words Comments
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| nice poem |
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| Name: niki | 2005-05-24 |
| i like to write poems and yours really describes me and my boyfriend. you wrote a great poem. great job. |
| well described |
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| Name: Mike | 2006-06-30 |
| In our relationship I talk too much. He is an intensely introverted person, and only at times can be coaxed to let down his guard enough to sing. Your poem says succinctly what I feel for him without being verbose. |
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| Name: Thomas likes COCKS | 2006-10-08 |
| i just wanna say fuck your mum and dad thomas coz they created you, so its not your fault your a toe sucking dickhead you piece of shit OH i hope to GOD i see you coz then i'd fucking crap on your face you son of a mother fucking turd licking cock swallowing father fucking knob chewer, peace out poofta breth! |
| this is kind of stupid.. in more ways than one. |
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| Name: bella | 2010-01-30 |
| thats corny. real love is defiantly not like that. thats like perfect fairy-tale relationships between cinderella and her prince charming. . but everyone knows all relationships have their flaws, their ups and downs, and the moments when you wonder why your even with that person because they constantly hurt you. forgiveness is real, arguing is real, and a broken heart is very real. i think poetry should portray the truth.. . and not sugar coat how life really is. This kind of poetry frustrates me. and thomas or whoever you really are.. you either an immature fourteen year-old thinking your badass for writing a poorly worded comment on a poetry site or your just mad at life because you cant get any ass.. all you have is your hand. am i right? someone needs to chill out. if you think their poetry sucks, then put up your own.. so people can just make fun of yours. |
| this is good |
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| Name: Jenna R | 2012-03-17 |
| dont hate this is good good job |
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